Taking notice

Description

Baekhyun always noticed when his friends were feeling down. He had brilliant observational skills. So when Sehun was heartbroken he noticed and tried to help and comfort him. Only one person didn't expect the outcome of this.

 

 

Foreword

Baekhyun noticed how Sehun world started to crumble after being ignored so many times by LuHan. Naturally, being a friend, he tried to help. What he wasn't counting on was falling in love along the way. 

 

A/N: Hi everyone! I would like to say that I new at this, this is my first fic ever, so criticize all you want, just don't be to harsh. I am also warning you that english is not my native tongue so any errors I apologize (especially because I am posting this just I finished writing it). Also, this is fiction, which means that whatever happens in this story is a figment of my imagination and any resemblence of the charactes/idols that I based my work of with real life is merely a coincidence. Enjoy!

 

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MoroccanBlackDragon #1
Chapter 1: zGQSDUIA THIS IS THE CUTEST EVER didn't I read it before?? IT DOESN'T MATTER! You did great! i love u
R_nine21 #2
Chapter 1: sebaek :)
nocticolic #3
Chapter 1: I can never get enough of sebaek. ;; < 3
Lol my name is gonna be everywhere.
ItsWompy #4
Chapter 1: FIRST STORY?!?!!? HOW COME I LOOKED OVER THIS!?!?!? I LOVE IT!
theperfnerd #5
Chapter 1: I CANT BELIEVE I NEVER READ THIS BEFORE I CANT BELIEVE IT SEBAEK IS SO PRECIOUS IM SO GLAD SEBAEK HAPPENED
DGNA_Forever #6
Chapter 1: So, I was correct in thinking this would be a tear-jerker. I felt so bad for Sehun. He didn't deserve to be treated that way by LuHan. I'm glad Baekhyun was there to pick him back up. I hope that they can learn to trust one another, in the future. This was a beautiful story<3.
DGNA_Forever #7
Oh no! This looks like a tear jerker...
libianno #8
Chapter 1: This was really impressive. Save for some little fixable error it really was close to perfection. The plot was clear and the storyline soooo solid and well executed. You told a story that has meaning and you did so realistically and beautifully, simply and from the heart. Is it within my rights as a friend to say that I'm proud?? Either way I really am.

Just add me as your beta and I can make it perfect for you. I want it to be 100 before I advertise it for you :)
Powerpuffgull #9
Chapter 1: Oh my Sebaek..<3<3 I just love dese two together so i didn't mind..abt Lulu, well he already realized wht he did so dat's enough..
U did a gd job fr a first timer..dere r some grammatical mistakes bt eventually u'll get better...:)
And i hope u'll write more Sebaek...:D
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