Another Life

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The door groaned open as the lone figure stepped into the darkness of the room. Hands crept along the wall to get a bearing and in search of something. And after a few short seconds, upon finding the irregularity in the smooth expanse of the wall, a sigh was heard and the switch flicked on.

Light. 

The brightness almost painfully flooded into the room bringing with it a tide of memories, drowning the stranger immediately with the past.

Another time. Another life.


The figure - a tall brooding male- stood frozen still at the entrance, as if to slowly get his thoughts straight and take in the past with all its memories locked in this tiny room at the end of the narrow hallway, with cobwebs decorating the corners.

He let his eyes roam.

Foreword

A/N:

Hi!!!! So um this is like the first time I'm writing something - I've never done stuff like this 

Funny how Sekai is making me do things!

Anyway..... um I'm NOT a writer so excuse the mistakes and stuff >_< **

Kumawoah~ *Muwah*

And Obiviouthly. I wouldn't have done any of this if not for my crazy chingus. Kamsamnida Nellie-yah and Maknae-yah! And um, Joelii

(Sounds like a boring vote of thanks, yeah? Ok, Imma stop before I ramble even more)

 

** T/N: (ie. Typist's note)

Yeah, Tiacha claim's she's not a writer; But hell, this kid's got talent! Don't believe me? Read on, and find out for yourself!

~Maknae-yah

And since I couldn't find the correct Gif (Mianhae~)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
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Totally_Extreme #1
Chapter 3: Haha I love this !!!!


Nice job!!!Fighting!!
notsohardsehun #2
Chapter 4: i like your story, your english is good.. thumbs up!!
its just that.. i dont really get whats happening.. its confusing!!
but i like the start where the kids meet and stuff... that part is really sweet....
keep up.. you can do well!!
hahaha...
sekaifanatic #3
Chapter 5: Wow this is pretty intense 1 moment it's hilarious the next it's heartbreakingly sad I honestly don't know what to feel right now
Kim_Kichul #4
Chapter 4: I promised to comment and I'm doing so!
Okay, first things first. The plot was interesting, but I couldn't figure out what was going on haha but it's my fault, I'm just dumb.
Your writing style in this fic is kinda chaotic, but it's your first time so it's okay, you can work this out and I'm sure you will.
The only thing I don't like is those comments in **, but it's not a big deal.
To sum up, I like it and I hope you will become better and better at writing.
Love, Ki C:
Teliel #5
Chapter 4: No I don't I wanna sequel :(
altschmerz #6
Chapter 4: Hii! I don't know if you regognize me but I'm that weird author from the story 'Above the clouds' and as I stalked your profile (omg still awkward D:) I stumbled over this story... And damn girl you got some skills! This was so beautiful and the gifs! *faintsssss SEQUEL PUH-LEASE~ I really hope you'll continue to write!<3
NellieJ #7
Chapter 4: You know what I like about your fanfic Tiacha? The fact that you mange to put crack and fluff and angst all into one beautiful story. *sigh* I love it. Its amazing! I think I read it for like the 4th time now with the minus the proof reading in school that day :p where is our sequel tiacha? *wink wink*
Joelii #8
Chapter 4: Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! SEQUEL PLEASE!!!!!
Ah this is so good!!! You are a genius!!! Hehe *fangirling* \(^o^)/
I was laughing so hard when they were trying to sneak out!!! Hilarious XD
And everything else just crazy feels!!! You are such a good writer!!!! Please PLEASE write more!!!
cherrychipmunk #9
Chapter 4: And the end!!!! .....just, just tell me if my interpritation is right okay? It's Another Life- because That Life, the memories they shared in that room, like, all the memories of their childhood and friendship and brotherlyness, all went away when the fire came? and the room fell into disrepair? And now, Sehun just is Reminiscing it all... (Kai is alive n well) and he decides, the life then, that life, is over... and he's ready to start afresh, with Kai, no longer his brother, but his boyfriend?
(Or have I gone completely off track?)
And...... two comments, sorry about that, coz I just couldn't fit it all into one, there was just so much to say, you know, that's how brilliant your story is!!!! Saranghae, Tiacha~
And... sorry, no sekai gifs this time, but hope all those sehun gifs made you smile ^___^ (coz you deserve it~)
cherrychipmunk #10
Chapter 4: RANTING TIME!!!!!
Omo, I was dying keeping this off the T/N, coz I knew you'd get all eat-paper-face-d and I felt sorry for you, but now I just cant hold back
TIASHA YOU ARE A BLOODY GENIUS!!! I mean- okay, can I start from the beginning- the beginning. WOW! just wow- remember, I said about some author, the author who wrote Stained Glass (Blonde, tattooed jongin) -she painted scene's with words. You've done that, only better. because the picture you discribed. is just. AWOW!!! It's so beautiful, and I can like see it, and I'm like, dying!!!!
~That fallen angel, he was damned after all...... I await this sequel. (dying waiting... ahhh, so curious- but I said, good curious, not bad -immakillyoumoffat-curious)
Ahhh, the tention in the memory, the sneaking out one... I just LOVE. and you've even managed to poke in references, with doc Ock and all XD (Typical of Sehun to say something spiderman related!!! X'D) ...and anime chicks! DANG how d'ya come up with these, you little genius!!!
Ahhh... and the way you describe that room... how, HOW did you put so much... IDK depth, and memories into it all, and you didn't even over do it- it's like, the perfect amount. (Did Ms Vai seriously say you have no writing style? 0.0 Someone ought to... idk, kill her, prove her wrong, show her this! Something! GOD you write beautifully! And I'm so proud, you know... so proud that I convinced you you were good, good enough that you started writing this 'Oneshot' and proved to us how amazing you are. I hope you never stop writing, Tiasha~
Oh, and then comes that superduper confusing part- (Thanks for explaining it to me, but chincha, you owe your readers an explaination- in other words, the sequel) ahh, but thanks for tellin me :)
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