Minho's Thoughts 6

Blueberry Stars

 

 

After his exams were over Minho had several days off, he had even called in from work, to take some time to enjoy his free time.  Thoughts about the boy, and how he had stopped coming in seemed to fade less and less.  It was only on Thursday when he was standing in front of the cold oven with an empty mind that he seemed fully reminded of it. He bent down and opened the oven door and the cold feeling in his chest froze back over in an instant.  Pushed back in the corner of the dark oven was the fritter he had made several weeks ago, tucked away for the boy that had never come back. 

 

Suddenly, Minho felt sick, frustrated and angry all at once, and had the urge to leave the kitchen. He didn't want to cook, he didn’t want to go through his day and wait for 4 o'clock to come and go and wonder if the boy was okay, if he was ever coming, back, or if something bad really did happen, or wonder why he cared so much anyways. 

 

He remembered how agitated the boy had been the last time he saw him. So many possible things could have happened to him, and Minho would never know. It wasn’t his business to know, but he wanted to. But as Minho took the rock hard little cake out of the oven and threw it away he hoped with all his might that even if he never saw the boy again, that he was at least okay. 

 

 

 

 

(A/N; I hope you guys are using the bookmark tag for this story because I really have no plan for how many chapters I add at a time lol.

 

Anyways, for those readers who work retail, do you ever imagine what your regular customers are like outside of where you see them?  I have worked several places and I have few people I will never forget, because they were so interesting, even though I never interacted with them more than through a check out stand.)

 

 

 

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Shinee2020 #1
Chapter 19: A few years later and still so cute! :)
myseonflower
#2
Chapter 19: Love it ❤️
Shinee2020 #3
Chapter 19: Wow....love it! :)
MrsLeeTaemin
#4
Chapter 18: THIS IS TOO CUTE STOP IT.
DKey2Happiness #5
Chapter 19: So so cute!!!!! Will there be a sequel?? I need more of this fluffiness in my life!! <3
pinky_jinki
#6
Chapter 19: Lsjfkekddj ;----;♡
Sooo beautiful, I freaking loved it ;-;♡
Sosooo cute, they both were so cute ;u;
Ahhhh these type of stories always makes me happy
(Everything related with 2min makes me happy xd)
Layni17
#7
Chapter 19: SEQUEL I AM BEGGING YOU PLEASE DEAR LOVE THERE IS SO MUCH POTENTIAL AND THIS IS ALREADY ONE OF MY FAVORITE 2MIN FICS DESPITE THE SIMPLICITY BUT IT WAS GORGEOUS AND CUUUUUUTE COFFEESHOP!AUS ARE AMAZING!
Calming down now, I do have a single critique that stood out:
I know I'm a fast reader, but I read this whole fic in FIFTEEN minutes. It may be your style, or you maybe you struggle making long chapters. I can get the blog chapters ((Which, by the way, were probably my favorite thing about this)) being short, but...I dunno, I wish it had a bit more depth to it, though I did enjoy the simple plotline. It's rare to find such simple fluff with more than five chapters, so I commend you for being able to carry on for that many chapters.
Besides that I am throughly pleased with "Blueberry Stars." Which is, by the way, my favorite title, like, ever.
Good job, I'll definitely read more of your works!
Sparklecupcake252 #8
Chapter 19: That was so cute!!!
shinee02
#9
Chapter 19: Soooo fluffy~
This fic you have here gives me happy feelings, author-nim. The pictures from Taemin's personal blog make the story unique, and I like it very much. Thanks for this. <3
Bored0ut0fHerMind
#10
Such a sweet ending! Leaves me wanting for more though. Any chance of an epilogue or sequel? :)