She drove the investigation team insane trying to track the killer down, but just as expected of her, she does not leave any marks behind – it would be a shame if she were to get caught when things were just about to get interesting.
Chapter 1: Heok. Once again, I was surprised, but based on your previous oneshot, I already had a hunch that Joohyun could be the potential killer, especially with her being so secretive about her bedroom. Despite this story's tragic ending, your plot, character development and the build up to the story's was just well executed. The length was just right and it wasn't at all too short or too long (to the point it makes you want to roll your eyes in annoyance). Although I am sad that one of them has to die, there's no doubt that you are one truly talented author when it comes to tragedy, crime and suspense. Keep it up!
Chapter 1: You are so brave to write something like this about Yongseo. This is good though...
I think you should write more misteries, but a small request, please don't kill either one of Yongseo and make them live happily ever after... Pretty please...
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