Background Information on Me

Hey, all!

I'm nasomi2011 and I have been on AFF for over five years, now. In case you all were wondering if I am a credible reviewer (which I hope I am), I will give you a few pointers about myself. I am not aiming to feed my ego or anything like that, I just want to help you all feel assured that the reviews you will be receiving are coming from a valid source. XD

*I graduated with a Bachelor's Degree in the English major and Theatre minor. So, I dedicated four years of my life to studying the English language (and more, since I live in the United States).

*I am pursuing a Master’s Degree in Elementary Education and will graduate as of May 2017. Before I become an Elementary Teacher, I would like to teach English in Korea for a few years, first.

*During my last five semesters as an undergraduate, I tutored a wide range of college students for morning Writing Labs, taking in mostly WRI 1100 and 1200 students (Introduction to Expository Writing and Research Writing classes). Also, I took a class two years ago that taught students how to be Writing Mentors. This class included lessons on how to treat tutees/clients with kindness and respect and what to focus on (grammar vs. writing).

*Although English is, technically, my second language, I was born and raised in Hawaii. This means that I am a native English speaker.

As I mentioned before, I'm not here to degrade you, but to help you become a better writer. I am in no way stating that I myself am a great writer, but I just want to share things that I have learned with all of you. :)

Anyways, thank you for subscribing to this very plain review shop! I really appreciate it!

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teenme14 #1 Oct 21, 2015 03:22:24

Hi ^^ Are you still open for requests?

JESLEN #2 Jul 21, 2015 21:36:05

Requested :-)
Thank you very much in advance ^_^

JESLEN #3 Jul 21, 2015 06:14:52

Hello ^_^ It's me! Lols. Ive already credited you!
And gosh. Your reviews are really thorough and satisfying.
I would like to request again but I have one question though: after reading rule 5, is it ok to request when I already received reviews from other shops? Thanks so much

ScarletBallerina #4 Jul 10, 2015 01:57:44

Chapter 9: Hello! I'm so so sorry for responding to you very late, I was quite busy with other things too, myself hahaha!

As usual, thank you so much for the in-depth review! It gave me a much more-thorough grasp with regards to writing one-shots! The review helped me so much! Your words will help me improve and I got to learn a few bits and pieces of advice! Thank you so much!

Diaz96 #5 Jul 8, 2015 13:47:31

I've requested!!!!

jovayuyu #6 Jul 8, 2015 06:47:58

Hi! I have requested! :-)

kpopfanficmonster #7 Jul 8, 2015 04:30:18

Chapter 5: Omg that gif tho. Hahahahaah

Jung. Taek. Woon.

JESLEN #8 Jul 7, 2015 01:59:26

Chapter 10: Congratulations for finishing your degree! I understand that we must prioritize our lives outside of AFF so dont be sorry about the long wait. This review is worth waiting for :-) And you're not harsh at all silly! :-) I loved constructive criticism thats wThank took such great care in selecting reviewers. Amd you'rethe first reviewer of this story. Once again,thank you very much for this awesome review. I will make sure to incorporate the suggestions and to credit too (using my mobile right now so it's kinda hard to do it properly). But i promised that i will definitely credit :-) Thank you for deciding to continue reading the story despite the flaws. I really appreciate the time you invested in reviewing this and I will surely request again :-)

3/3

JESLEN #9 Jul 7, 2015 01:50:20

Chapter 10: I absolutely agree with all of the things that you pointed out about the plot. To be honest, all i thought was the beginning and end of the story. I already laid out the beginning and i have the idea how to end it. But my mind keeps on juggling ideas for the events in the middle of the story. That is why it took me months to update, it's like i had this difficulty in threading dark water where i had put myself. I just updated recently because i feel do bad not updating. For now,im working really hard in laying out every detail/event.

Now that you mentioned it, the characterization is not too strong. I hve to take note of that too. I had this idea of making joongki mysterious, to the point that i will refrain from using his pov as much as possible. But i think that his character might become too dull if i do that. Well the use of mediums by angels,of why they use them instead of ppearing as themselves will be pointed out later on :-) for now, i might unintentionally give spoilers haha.

2/3