Monthly Meeting

Description

Kyungsoo is forced to wake up at four in the morning to go look at the local store for something really important. Chanyeol is the really nice employee that helped him maybe a little too much.

Foreword

"I do need help. I-I, uhm," he started, blushing like a twelve years old at what he was about to ask. "I'm looking for tampons..."

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peanutoast
#1
Chapter 1: This is so adorable! *cries marshmallow tears* I think you chose the perfect pairing, they are both sometimes really fluffy in their behaviour. It was so relaxing reading this, I don´t know why, but could you write more stories of this kind?
ryeohaeme #2
Chapter 1: this is cute~
Joelii #3
Chapter 1: Hehe this is adorable in a weird way (I love weird though lol) and I think it's really good for English not being your first language ^-^
I read tite_mily's comment and there are a few mistakes but nothing big :) it is always difficult editing your own writing. One of the things I do is start at the end of the story, going paragraph by paragraph, working my way up to the beginning. That way I don't get lost in reading the story and can focus on looking for mistakes. I hope I explained that in a way you can understand :D and I hope it helps.^u^
I would also love to see a second part of what happens the next month hehe XD I think that would be really cute <3
Tite_mily #4
Chapter 1: Aww it was a really cute and short story! I'd just recommend that you proof read again your text because there are some repetitions. You could also break some sentences into smaller ones :)