Foolish

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So I recently came across the drabble tag and got curious enough to research about it. Apparently a drabble is a short story of precisely 100 words. This is the original definition of a drabble but it has been expanded to reach 200, 500 and even 1000 words.  While surfing the drabble tag on asianfanfics I realised that not many seem to realise what it actually means. I'm using drabble here in the traditional sense, I.e a strory with precisely 100 words.  Its quite a challenge, how do you convey anything with so little words, and still have it pass a message and make perfect sense. I've been quite stuck on this since yesterday and this is my end result. I'd like you guys I.e the readers to let me know if I succeeded or not. This is very, very short but I hope it makes sense. 

Any skydragon shipper would've noticed the distance between the two leaders recently especially during the AIA music festival/ YG family tour where our hopes for any interactions were dashed and this is based on that. It captures a single moment of thought from Lee Chaerin. Enjoy.

Foreword

This distance is killing me..........

All I want is to go to him and be by his side........

So foolish, I should not have agreed........

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Longlivereptar #1
Chapter 1: Yearning for someone within your grasp and fighting the urge to be by them is emotionally damning, mentally draining, and physically dreadful when aching for affection. Distraught by the widening rift in distance and minimized sense of obligation to distinguish business and pleasure, Chaerin was trapped in love-limbo. I enjoyed your drabble though, of course, I wish there was more!
ErinKrystal #2
Chapter 1: Okay. It's short but I like it! :3
ficsystem #3
Chapter 1: it broke my heart so i guess it is safe to say that this makes sense and is awesome!
clovey #4
Chapter 1: Even though I do feel that it's slightly shorter (perhaps since we are all so used to reading more fics) I thought this drabble was brief but nicely written to point :) ^^
miicodin #5
Chapter 1: Omg. For me, you have perfectly conveyed your feelings, Chaerin's feelings. Her feelings of foolish-ness of accepting but not really wanting to. Her desire of being with Jiyong, to be near him. But she can't because she agree'd to him even if this was for their own safety. ♡♡

I really like drabbles because it perfectly conveys the feelings in such a limited amount of words. But at the same time I hate them. It makes me want more.
fandhate #6
Chapter 1: isn't it too little author-nim? yes I know that it's 100 words but I didn't get the feeling but i don't know either .... maybe because I already adapt with long chapter ...
kloweanime #7
Just stopping by to say I loved it, it made perfect sense. I was wonderful. Great job.
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