Bad boy's girl

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I think we should stop.... you said

Why you know you like it......

Please...

Why..... he said kissing your neck.

Kai and sohee were childhood friends for life until when they turned 12 he just stop talking to her he started being a player and getting bad grades, being rude and talking back to teacher and adults. When he turned 16 he started having with different girls not caring if they were hurt afterwards or not. Until one day when both of you have a night alone it will be a change for the both of you. And does kai have a secret that you never thoght.

SOHEE

17 yrs old

Smart, loves singing, want's to know why kai doesn't talk to her anymore,haves a protective dad who is a police officer,related to suho kai's friends but never talk to him because then his crazy fan girls would come and kill the hell out of you.

KAI

18 yrs old

Bad guy, wrong person to mess with, in a gang that everybody in the school knows about except sohee, haves a reason why he stop talking to sohee but doesn't want to tell her,loves having ,haves with different girls but krystal is his buddy,best friend with taemin but in a gang with exo because exo were his friends whenever kai didn't have anybody and were there for him all the time when taemin wasn't

AILEE

17 yrs old

The best friend a person could ever have, always there for you, the only best friend you have because nobody else likes you for some reason, dating taemin, new kai was in a gang, but didn't know you'll were best friends, sweet, smart,sticks up for you, the nickname that you gave her is ail

TAEMIN

18 yrs old

Love ailee, best friends with kai and knows why he stop talking to you, smart, sweet unless you mess with ailee or get on his nerves, isn't in a gang with kai because he isn't that cruel, hes not a player, and hates what kai is doing but kai won't listen to him when he tells him to stop

EXO

A gang known as the most baddest gang in the korea, suho is related to you, some of the members are sweet but can be a bad- once you mess with them,known kai since he was 12 and been helping him through his way

MR PARK

Sohee dad, piloce officer, very protective over her, knows kai and hates him, 46 yrs old

JOHN

26 yrs old

Loves you, very protective of you,him and kai know each other and completely hate each other

KRYSTAL

18 yrs old

Hates you, know you and kai were best friends, always messing with you, and telling you about how kai ed her hard to get on your nreves, going to start bullying you and getting the whole school against you once the news breaks out about you and kai

Foreword

Ok so this is my 3rd story and the other stories just have like 1 and 2 comments or subscribers so i'm trying to get way better. So please be nice to me and please tell me how you think about this story if you hate it or if it's good i don't care because i need to get better so please tell me the truth. But please don't say anything mean to me like i'm stupid etc... just about the story thx you..

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Maria_Maraki #1 Nov 10, 2014 19:20:06

Chapter 3: I like this story!!! Please update!

Kaigirl123 #2 Aug 23, 2014 21:52:28

Chapter 1: OK thank you so much because i'm really trying to get better but i will try and because ailee doesn't know that they new each other, and kai told her that he new who she was but i will check out your story and thx you for helping me.

ExoKai121 #3 Aug 23, 2014 21:51:50

Also, you need to have an eye catching forward to give an insight of the story, telling people abut about what the story is about, because people won't bother reading If they don't know what the story is about.
One final thing, just try your best and it will work out!

ExoKai121 #4 Aug 23, 2014 21:48:34

Chapter 1: Ok so it is an Ok chapter, it's not bad at all but you might need to consider checking over your work for any errors either grammatical or missing out words.
What I don't get is that why do Kai and sohee have to introduce themselves again if they were childhood friends and I think instead of writing the persons name that's speaking( like a script) you should use speech marks and things like 'she replied, she said, etc.
I am not meaning to promote my fanfics but if you would like to check out my story just for a read over, you don't have to subscribe if you don't want to, but just to give you an idea of how to make your work better( not that I'm a fantastic writer) the story is called Hurt Me, Heal Me, if you go to my stories you will see.
Good luck!