Chapter 1: This was really fast and concise and i actually really liked that it was as realistic as it is.
I'm just going to rant a little: it's so frickin unfair when people expect you to make things official all the time in order for it to be a 'proper relationship'. But I can't deny that it's necessary more often than not. Either you make your boundaries clear, or you go with the flow and acknowledge that if you aren't clear with what you want, you're just being an and hurting another person (more so than when you bluntly tell them you're not interested or something).
But i really liked this read, so thanks for this <33
Chapter 1: Nicely bittersweet, just the right portion of both..
IDK, I feel a bit curious about what thought Dae might have, but I also feel that it is just fine this way.
Thanks for this ^^
Chapter 1: I like this. Even though it's very simplistic and I haven't seen your other styles, it really nice and speaks a lot with just minimum use of words. ; v ; Very touching~ Thanks for writing!
Chapter 1: I like the writing style you tried out here in this. It fits well with the abrupt changes and the time periods because its kept short but with a sense of dramatic as it has an great impact while reading whenever something happens (in my opinion!)
The whole build-up is nice too! Can't decribe that well ( Im not an author I'm sry!) but the way everything progressed and built up felt like a poem of some kind, that was really nice!
Even though not really a happy end, it still fit well with the whole story flow, I liked that a lot too.
Overall a really nice work :)
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