The Dandelion: azxema

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Story: The Dandelion

Author's profile link: azxema

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First Impression (3.5/5): The atomsphere was not misleading, which is a very good start. Most authors here make a gag-worthy fluffy fic, while the atomsphere of the page itself says otherwise. Yours did not. As soon as I saw the color scheme, I knew it will be romance. And it's going to be cute. However, you must be wondering why, oh, why did I give you three-point-five? Simply: The impression was not impacting. That's it. Period.

Story Title (4/5): You did a good job with your title. It was simple, yet immensely intruiging. It would be better if you erased the article.

Poster/Background Bonus (4/5): The poster was good. The textures match, and so do the colors. The only thing that made me deduct a point is the font. Simply hidious. I did not like it AT ALL. Other than that, everything's okay.
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invisible_girl #1 Jun 18, 2016 05:57:33

Chapter 3: I would like to cancel my request.
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Story title: 5 Advantages Of Dating a Policeman

Min_ErChan12 #2 Dec 2, 2015 23:09:37

(Request are closed atm.sorry and thanks)

Min_ErChan12 #3 Dec 2, 2015 23:06:06

(everyone this is the admin_MinErChan12..Sorry to inform u guys..We are quite busy with our school or real life's here but we will see what we can do in the mean time!Sorry guys!)

invisible_girl #4 Apr 23, 2015 09:05:21

Chapter 3: Hi, I've requested at your shop. Unfortunately, due to my upcoming exams, I am forced to deactivate my AFF account for a month. I know that some shops may have objections about it, but I'm addicted to this side, and it makes me read fanfics, while I should be reading my Biology textbook. However, my point is, I don't want to cancel my request, because I'm definitely coming back, but I won't be able to pick it up until the 19th of May. (Approximately), and here some designers/reviewers have a problem. When I log back in, the first thing I do, is to check the shop, see if my request is completed, pick it up, and credit the shop. Don't worry about that.

You can postpone my request, and do other people's requests which are behind me in the queue.

Thank you, and I hope you won't blacklist me or anything.

invisible_girl

JaiGuanlin #5 Feb 8, 2015 21:15:08

I've requested for a review~

invisible_girl #6 Feb 8, 2015 11:23:43

Hi, I just want to ask if you don't forget about my request. I rquested for a review it like 4 months ago, and I'm not even on a request list. Did I do something wrong?

azxema #7 Feb 7, 2015 18:48:10

picked up my review c :

summerdust #8 Feb 7, 2015 07:27:42

hi ^^ just wanna ask if you receive my request? or did i fill up the form wrong? thanks

yehet061190 #9 Feb 6, 2015 23:53:57

Thank you for the review. It helped me so much!^^
Sorry for late.

inspiritxbaby #10 Feb 6, 2015 07:46:05

Submitted 2 requests, thanks~