Chapter 1: This story is making me want to sing :3 So fascinating, all the words, filled with colors and flowers, and ocean, beautiful things fit together, so perfectly, a wonderful piece of work. I'm loving every single sentences..

Chapter 1: Ah, I'm not good at interpreting stories, so I hope you won't mind!

up until mention about money (which I should've seen coming with the Bonnie and Clyde reference but eh I've never been good at this), I assume it was just the falling out of a relationship? like in the beginning both are described in poetic, almost fitting words (as if they were made to be pieces of each other), with flowery words and structure - all the sentences are quite long - whereas near the red things become more short and abrupt; the words sound cutting rather than complementing. heh, this is the aesthetic - or at least the aesthetic which you write about - i've come to associate with you :D it's very nicely written, i think, and the references fit in well with the story - you reference, i believe purposely, all tragic figures? i'm personally not sure about the ending of the little mermaid, but in the version i remember he marries another princess, and she's turned into foam. cleopatra is beautiful but i can't quite remember her story, and bonnie and clyde started off as criminals and things just went downhill from there - so I applaud you for your imagery and descriptions and everything you know I usually talk about <3 the whole dysfunctional, loving relationship is something characteristically you as well <3

you know the rest; DROOLING OVER YOUR PURPLE PROSE AND AESTHETIC;; and teach me sometime <3