Chapter 4: seok is absolutely adorable and so is Luhan and oh my god, I love how you described Minseok's first impression of Jongdae. I wouldn't be surprised if his heart skipped a beat there already.
Also I love Yixing in this fanfiction here.
He's awesome and I've been laughing way too loudly at this message ;D
Can't wait for the following chapters and I'm curious of Jongdae's side.Like... are Minseok and Luhan really that invisible and how was Jongdae's first impression of Minseok? :3

(I hope I don't post this comment two times now since my phone was being a the first time I tried)

This is so cute hElP!

Chapter 4: Jongdae is too cute in this. I wonder what his past trauma is. Minseok is also a cutie. Ugh, Everyone's just too cute. I really like this. There needs to be more chenmin in the world. Update soon:)

Chapter 4: Oh gosh, thank you so much for making this chenmin story ^^ It's so interesting, I can't wait for the next chapter:D

Chapter 4: Oh, wow. I love your style of writing. So detailed and clear. I can picture everything vividly. I'm really enjoying this. My two favorite couples and XiuHan friendship is a plus. HunHan! :)

Chapter 4: I really don't know what say about chapter besides is really good :)

Chapter 3: Short,but I still love it :) Jongdae is nice :) I think I know how it'll end but still I want to read it ^^
Hwaiting author-nim! :)

Chapter 2: Omo,It's so interesting.Why do you end in that moment? ;;;;;;;
Wait for next chapter =^ͺ^=

It's really good :) I can't wait for next chapter.

Hwaiting! ^^

Chapter 1: surprisingly this is pretty good so far. not trying to be mean but when people say a fic is their first fic i kind of dread it because it usually doesnt mean good grammar or spelling. but so far i think this is going well. i'll keep an eye on this fic ^^