You Make Me a Fool

Description

Gongchan was a smart, handsome, and well-known guy. He kept to himself which made him all the more intersting to the girls in his school. He appreciated the attention he recieved from his peers but preferred to stay within his small circle of friends.

Soo Young was similar in many ways, being intelligent, pretty, and popular. The only difference was that she enjoyed attention and made many friends.

The two end up becoming the best of friends.

What happens when he realizes he had fallen for her,

...but she already has someone else?


 

Hello! This story is my take on the song You Make Me a Fool from B1A4's latest album: Solo Day! Although it won't be exactly how the song is, the plot and some dialogue will be heavily based on my interpretation of the song's lyrics. I'll put my own twist on it, plus a background story for the two of them. 

Foreword

A few days pass by with not a single sight or word from her. 

Finally he spots her walking down the hallway during break.

"Soo Young.." 

"Don't make a scene here."

"But I need to explain.." he says, holding onto her wrist.

"Just leave me alone!" she says, breaking free from his grip.

She continues to walk in the direction she originally was, until he shouts out, "I'm sorry! I'm sorry for being selfish. But what did I do wrong? All I'm doing is liking you.. I'm not asking you to break up with him, or love me back. That's not what I want.. I know he's better than me and I want you to be happy. Liking you is enough for me, so please just stop avoiding me.." he says, nearly in tears.

"I'm sorry.." she says softly.

"For what?" he says, and runs his fingers through his hair in frustration. He doesn't want her to apologize; it's all his doing.

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babobana #1
Chapter 3: This was so cute!♥
banaaa123123
#2
KYAAAAA THIS IS SOOO GOOOD!!!!
hehehe yea Gongchan is my bias <333333
chrysxlism
#3
Chapter 3: why do I feel like crying after reading this TvT MY GONGCHAN FEELS~
awesome story!! :D I like :3
Wynteral
#4
Chapter 1: it bothERS ME BECAUSE SOOYOUNG'S LAST NAME IS CHOI NIGGA. but thats ok. its good. ahuehuehue.
lovelikeoxytocin #5
Chapter 3: Ooo~ really liked this three shot! It's cool how you incorporated the song and made a story around it :)
jinyounglove
#6
Chapter 3: HAPPY ENDING!!! SOOOO SWEEEEET:-* :-*
biasedonaron1
#7
Chapter 3: AWWWW SO KYEOPTA AUTHORNIM~ I love it ^-^ it's absolutely adorable. It's just.... Ugh, how do I even describe how lovely it is. I want to hug my iPad and squeal lol
Keep up the great work! I love your fics, honestly. Fighting!
its_just_me #8
This was a really good three-shot :) I loved it. Keep up the good work, author-nim!
Qian_B1A4 #9
Chapter 3: update soonnnnnn plsssss
jinyounglove
#10
Chapter 1: OHH NOO GONGCHAN what have you done!!!