LuFairy's Review Shop ~ [CLOSED]

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I N T R O D U C T I O N     &     R U L E S 

Hello, welcome to LuFairy's Review Shop! At the current moment, there is only one reviewer available (aka, me), but I will try my best to give honest reviews and constructive criticism for your stories. I don't believe in having too many rules so I will be keeping this as brief as possible:

1. Please subscribe to this page so you know when your review will be ready. You may unsubscribe once you receive it.

2. Comment after you receive your review and tell me what you think of it.

3. Be patient, because there's only one of me and while I will try my best to be as efficient as possible, I am not a machine. 

4. Upvoting and crediting this shop is highly encouraged, but you don't have to. I also do not have a blacklist because I hate being strict. 

5. Tell me what you want me to mainly focus on, whether it is plot, characterization, grammar, etc. 

 

Restrictions and Grading Rubric:

I will only accept OC and You stories. No Mpreg, , Yuri, or Heavy .

I pay heavy attention to grammar and spelling, but if your native language is not English, I will overlook some issues.

Unless I like your story, I will only read up to a minimum of 15 chapters. This is to conserve my time as well.

I give comments in specific areas such as: Title, Description/Foreword Appearance, Plot/Storyline, Characterization, Flow,  and Story/Character Development. If you would like my own opinion on your story, which is optional, please tell me so. 

I will grade each specific area with a 5/5 scale. This shop is mainly focused on giving writing advice and constructive criticism. 

Unlike other reviewers, I don't care much about your posters. They don't define writing ability. 

 

To Request:

In the comment section below, fill out these blanks:

Username:

Story Name:

Story Link:

Genre:

Characters:

Main Focus:

Personal Opinion [Optional]: 

 

Foreword

About Myself:

1. I also write fanfics, but I do that on another account so I won't have issues with keeping track of what goes where. If you would like to see it, message me and I will link it to you.

2. I can relate to those of you whose first language isn't English, since mine isn't either. However, English is one of my best subjects and I believe I am moderately qualified to give criticism on writing because of the Advanced courses that I have taken. 

3. I prefer Exo fanfics, but I will still read other idol groups because I know most of them. 

4. Feedback is always appreciated, so don't be afraid to tell me what you thought of my review.

5. And lastly, I am not a blunt and rude person. I will only tell you what you need to know to help you. That is all. 

Thank you.

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kiss_xander23
#1
Username: kiss_xander 23

Story Name: Heartattack

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/509234/heartattack-action-romance-exo-exok-baekhyun-byunbaekhyun

Genre: romance +action

Characters: Baekhyun and OC

Main Focus: plot and characters interaction
azure_bliss
#2
Chapter 1: Pick up and credited!
You're really fast, aha c:
I'll comment about Jangmi's personality hurm?
I intended to make her life-like, i.e a normal person that could actually exist in the real world. You probably get that the whole story revolved around two people growing together, and that was I waned in the first place. I actually didn't notice that about Jangmi, lol. I wrote chapter 1 and chapter 3 separately so that would explain the confusion in her personality?
She was, uh, 17 in the first chapter and 27 in chapter 3, a pregnant woman at that, a little sensitive, no? Even I don't know. xD

I am extremely happy with this review (edited the mistakes you pointed too c:).
Hope that your shop will...bloom? ^^
Again, thank you so much c:
gamioja
#3
Username: CacheAlmirah

Story Name: Tempestuous

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/680375/tempestuous-supernatural-thriller-wolf-originalcharacter-exok-exom-legendofexo

Genre: supernatural | thriller | original-character

Characters: EXO and OC (Shim Hyunjeong), and other supporting characters.

Main Focus: Plot | Characterisation | Grammar and use of the language

Personal Opinion [Optional]: I would like you to be as detailed as possible, so I can improve on my story. Only if you have the time, of course :D
And I'd love to hear your personal opinion!
azure_bliss
#4
I originally wanted to wait for someone else to request, to see how you'd handle the reviews. But since no one is requesting, then I guess I'll be the first one? :)

Username: VelvetLove01007

Story Name: Reminiscing Rose

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/754395/reminiscing-rose-bts-jungkook

Genre: Angst, Romance

Characters: Jeon Jungkook | Han Jangmi (OC) | BTS

Main Focus: I'd like you to focus on every aspect, especially characterization.

Personal Opinion: Uhm, I'm not a native speaker. The story's plot is extremely cliche but I hope that you'll look past that as I already tried making it my own. I'd also like to know your thoughts, as a reader, on the ending.

Thank you in advanced! c: