Chapter 2: Why?
I.really hate when that kind of word come out from the author .
But your story. your choice.
go.on

Chapter 2: I think you should start over and not to scrap it completely

This kinda bothers me a bit, it's kinda like a slap in the face almost. But I guess since your not stealing it I can do anything about it. I am not trying to be salty but think about it from my position. I am not looking for an apology or anything just a bit annoying and hurt. Cuz this sounds a lot like my plot line....

Chapter 1: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/99124/tempted-2min-jongkey-mblaq-shinee--yoai
How come this sounds just like this other story I read?

Chapter 1: AWWWW Taemin to the rescue!!! I love this already! I don't know that much about Super Junior's personalities per say but I remember their names pretty well. Please don't stop here! <3

Chapter 1: OMG I LOVE IT! KEEP WRITING PWEASE

Chapter 1: Your story is beautiful I like it❤