Chapter 10

A Sorta Fairytale With You...
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"Oppa, I'm ready."

"Oh.. Arasso, I'l wait for you at the entrance of the dorm."

And they hung up the phone. 

Yoo Jung made her way to the entrance... Joong Ki who was already waiting looked dapper in his outfit...

"Oppa!"

"Yoo Jung ah~~ You look incredible!"

"Thank you.. You too Oppa!"

The two kids walked hand-in-hand to the party's location. 

Unknown to them, they were being watched from afar.

"After you're done, bring her to this location," the man said while pointing to the map.

"Arasso."

The man then left on a separate car.

The other start to drive his car. He was approaching Joong Ki and Yoo Jung. He drove close enough to swerve and stopped right infront of Joong Ki and Yoo Jung.

"What... what .. what do you want?"

Joong Ki was attacked by a masked man on his neck causing him to faint and he uses a chlorofoam infused cloth to cover Yoo Jung's mouth and dragged her into the car. 

"I'm sorry kids. I had to." The masked man uttered.

He drove the girl to the location. 

*Knock Knock*

He opened the creaking door.

"Ahhh~~ You're here... Where is she?"

"There in the car.."

"Bring her in.."

The man carried Yoo Jung and placed her on the chair seated and tied.

There were several other build men surrounding the place.

"Can I have my payment now?"

"I already have it wired to you."

"Then I shall make a move..."

"Not so fast..."

*RRRiiiinnnggg!!*

"Hello?!"

"Do you want to know where your sister is?" A man with a deep voice spoke.

"Who the hell are you? Where is my sister?"

"Unnie~~ I'm scared... " Yoo Jung sobbed.

"Bastard don't you dare do anything to her..."

"Bastard? You dare to call me one?

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Kimtaehyung951230
#1
Please your story is dry
sarahsusanti #2
Chapter 13: Thank you for the whole story...^_^
minhakim #3
Chapter 13: Nice fic...thanks for sharing authornim
avrylle #4
Good job @piecesofrainbow...at least you know how to write a suspense one...its just reading between the lines...ahahahaha...thank you so much for the story...be bless chinggu!
tipani22 #5
Chapter 13: FF good as it differs from the usual Min Ho from a wealthy but a paupers home so very intriguing. Interesting also as Shin Hye is portrayed as a no nonsense strong willed woman compared to the usual weakling type. So loved it thoroughly. Thank you and looking forward to the next ff.
jishkariani_lali #6
Chapter 13: I feel myself very rude and greedy but I cant help myself to not say that...I hope you wont get engry and receive my sincere advices...this story was very short and very superficial. ..you can make this longer and express more...I cant imegine their love story...it was very very very unbelievable. ..there was lack of feelings and love...and story was gery messy and ,how can I say,but not interesting...I like you author and I believe you can write much better stories. ..you are very fast and and in a hurry you left lots of things which is necessary in the story.....I hope you dont understand it wrongly...I am very sincere and I love your imegination. ..I hope there will be much more stories from you...and I believe you will make it better♥
iloveness
#7
Chapter 13: Thank you for this lovely story...
Athena66
#8
Chapter 13: its light and fluffy but love it the same so anything new? Will be waiting for your next story.Thanks dear...
jishkariani_lali #9
Chapter 12: I left something? When became shinhye or minho inlove with each other? They weren't at least good friends and they are inlove???????? Tbeir realationship as friends was soososoos short they didn't knew almost anything about each other..and their "friendship" ended with that incident and how can it be tbey were inlve...its unbelievably for me...sorry but I need something more obvious to believe their feelings....you are very fast in that point...you could to blame shinhyes kindness for that behavior,that she helped minhoz mother...but you should not blame shinhyes feelings towards minho,that she likes minho...its very superficial. ..its only my thoughts. ...sorry if I dont undarstand or left something(becouse you are realy fast and maybe I have left some chapter) anyway thank you♥♥♥
kilumur #10
Chapter 12: are u writing machine?i can't believe.haha anyway thank alot for the fastest update.