PLAYING WITH MY HEART :(

Description

this story is one evidence of karma is just around so dont play with someone else feeling if u not ready with the consequence. just some high school love story  based on my friend's experienced.

Foreword

"lets break up" that word flowing soo smoothly from his mouth till i thought he didnt think before he say it. when i heard it , the sky is like crashing down on my head. my heart hurting like someone take it out from it socket and stab it over and over again. i know he just playing around with me since the begining but i never thought he would be this harsh. i'm stupid for falling in love with him when i know he wouldnt fall for me...

"huh?! what do u mean? i thought u love me" i said with tears in my eyes

"i used to love u, but  not anymore. goodbye jaejoong-ssi" he said it like we are some stranger and leave me alone just like what i want in the first place. 

"YAH!!! u JUNG ING YUNHO, dont even think i would just give up on u that easily. u hear me?!" i scream and throw my shoe at him before he can walk too far away from me.

as expected the shoe land safely in his head

"OUCH!! YAH WHY WOULD I FALL IN LOVE WITH U IF U THROW ME UR SHOE? U STUPID KIM ING JAEJONG" he screamed back at me

"I DONT CARE! U MUST BE FALLING IN LOVE WITH ME AGAIN!" i stick out my tongue at him then ran away before he can throw back my shoe

 

how is it?

this is my first time writing fanfic so please dont be too harsh with me, i'm still a newbie. English is not my first language so please bear with it. this is maybe just a oneshoot or twoshoot, i dont know yet.

hope u like it. this fic is based on my friend real experience, so if there's a similiarity to other story that's just a coincidence.

please leave a comment if u think i should continue it or not. kamsha hamnida^^

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matte-blvck
#1
<3
CassiePurple #2
I love this fic very much ^^
I like the way Jaejoong try so hard to ,make Yunho fall in love with him again. And I love the way you make the strong image for each characters.

Ah~ I really want to know what will happen in the next part. Cause it's so interesting ^^
avclaire #3
YO!U-KNOW... ur fic really entertain. I can't say "bored" word or "nothing special" words for ur fic,darling...this is show us a teenager life and behave, fresh, have a strong character for each person in this story, especially for Jaejoong.
keep up ur good work,hun..I'm one of ur subscribers now..^^
doue_suki
#4
I love this fic!!! :D

update soon please <3
MiszCJung #5
yo! :) I'm yr new subscriber. xD Have just read yr fic.
I totally enjoyed this! ^_^ Simply loveeee Jae's character. he's sooo bright and energetic from beginning till now.. ;D And totally love the flashback on their date. Simple and er, so Jae-ish! ;D Even not much loveydoveyness but still the snarkiness and Jae's natural behavior makes it veryy cute!! x)) They are very adorable. <3
And why Yunho. Why he like giving in that easy!? This couple seriously need to be locked up together and have a good talk! He shouldn't throw away his soon-to-be love just to maintain his credit card and luxuries. But Yunho is very shweet! ;))
nomoney20
#6
update.
usedtobehere #7
how about for me?
jaelicious
#8
i thought it a chap..
what,u want to private it?
no,plz no!!
i'm waiting so long to read this..
sobs sobs...
jaelicious
#9
new reader here...hahahahah!!!such a great story...very funny and sad at same time..<br />
yunho is not in love with that ahjumma,it's just for the sake of his grade..moreover,he's in love with jae already.it's just he don't want to acknowledge it..so,jae u need to seduce yunho more.don't give up.<br />
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and plz update soon..
ValinChun
#10
Wah,it has been so long!!! :D<br />
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Poor Jaema,he had been played by Yunpa again :'(<br />
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Hope,what Yunpa had said was true.dont make Jaema sad again :'(<br />
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Lhie,pls update sooner ne *begging u