Something Wrong Within Me

Description

They think something is wrong within me.

I think I am perfectly fine.

But maybe they were right.

 

Foreword

My first OnHo! Written in Jinki's POV and I couldn't leave my OTP so it turned out to be OnHo with side OnKey. Haha my eonni, royalvelvet inspired me with her OnHo story to write one. Eonni, here it is. But forgive me. I'm not good in writing fics like you :)

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lily_bunny #1
Chapter 1: wow, reading this again still makes me cry a mess..
NyMVPOnsonnie #2
Chapter 1: I'm sure I'm not crying just because I'm on the streets D: poor JinKi :'(
royalvelvet #3
Chapter 1: I am speechless because I am trying to hold back my tears. This is unbelievably beautiful. My mind is too blank to leave a decent comment. I am still in your story. Sitting in the corner of the room watching Jinki cry into Kibum's chest. I feel as if Minho is sitting besides me watching them too.

*I am not going to cry. I am not going to cry. Its just a story. Right?* Dang you for writing such a beautiful OnHo.
royalvelvet #4
Awww baby baby baby. Thank you for honoring me like this. I still have to read it but if its like your other OnKeys I am going to enjoy I know :D
flychicken97 #5
Chapter 1: oh my god. i cried i CRIED! How can he lives like that? so sad.. this is very well angst. i love this love this~ i dont wanna cry but i love angsty onho ToT
daringdarkangel5 #6
Chapter 1: 2 yearss??!!! I suspected it, but still it was just soo sadd!! Poor Jinki!!! Well done! :)
jubongnim #7
Chapter 1: OOOOOHHHHHHHH I KNEW THIS WOULD HAPPEN OH MY GOD. WHAT SHOULD I DO IM IM IM IM UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WHYYYY WHYYYY WHYYYYY WHYYYYYYY
lwyCarmen #8
Chapter 1: Gah I read this halfway and I figured that Minho died and I was so freaking sad already damn.
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