Dance

Dark Paradise

His kisses moved from my mouth to my jawline, his lips pressed against my neck ran up and down my neck in swift motions. The way his lips moved around my neck emitted a foreign feeling throughout my entire body and soul. I clung onto his t-shirt for support. I wasn’t exactly sure what to do with myself. I shut my eyes as his lips sent me into a euphoric state. His hands clung onto my thighs as he hoisted me up onto the bed as I let out a gasp and wrapped my arms around his neck for extra support. He laid me down carefully using his arms to support his own weight above me as he stood between my legs at the edge of the bed. Our eyes locked in the most intimate moment we had ever had, and that was all that was needed to understand his desire and my consent.

That night I spent it with him entangled under the bedsheets. He saw intimate parts of me that the sun had not yet kissed. I became a woman in his embrace and care. I danced the dance that a girl can only do once in their lives. I danced the most painful and pleasurable dance in my life with him with the moon as the only witness of our passionate night.

Afterword

Super short I know, but only because this was meant to be the last part of the previous chapter. Did you notice the previous chapter ended a little abruptly? I wasn't sure if I should have added this part in the last chapter because I thought it might make some of you feel uncomfortable. However, then I thought it's not necessarily , so I'm posting it now. Hope you like it. I'm in the process of writing the next real/full chapter, so look forward to it. Thank you to all the readers. I love the comments you all leave. <3 What should we call the Minzy and Kris paring? Till next time. :) 

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alcyonne
#1
Chapter 21: Thank you for ending it and on such a happy note too! I didn't think I'd witness their wedding from the first chapter and here we are. They really did go through hell, huh? I'm just glad they found their happiness! Time flies when you write a story and live a busy life. I'm glad you gave us an ending even if you had given us no warning last chap. Better to have a closure than nothing or else we'd be stuck forever haha. Even though it is short it was sweet and filled with the love that Kris and Minzy had. Some good ol fluff and romance right there after the storm. I'm kinda sad now that it is finished though, I'm running out of Minzy stories to read :( but best luck to your future endeavours whatever they may be. Thanks again for all the time and effort you invested in this! Congrats to Mr and Mrs Wu and for you for completing the story!
jiwonku #2
Chapter 21: WHAT? This is the end? still cant get over minzyxjongin so much
alcyonne
#3
Chapter 20: The ending got too real. As Minzy's fan who went through that terrible period in time where most blackjacks turned their backs on her - that almost made me as mad as I was back then. What's bittersweet was her going back to Yifan's arms - I just wish Minzy really did have someone to fall back to during the hate she got. Now back to the story, I reread a few paragraphs just because I wanted to savour it! I really didn't want it to end. The word count was gracious of you but I can never get enough! I do praise you for continuing, I was losing hope since this is your first update of the this year but its okay, you still put this out and it was well worth the time. A lot went on and you fed us well. Minzy finally returned to Yifan/EXO and even spent a year learning the ropes. I love this rekindling of their love and this honesty between them. Now Minzy is EXO's and Yifan's queen and it's just so amazing ; _ ; tho I'm very curious to learn what Sehun or perhaps even Kyungsoo's problems were. I'm guessing some members weren't for Minzy joining the team lol. I feel bad for Kai. I did actually enjoy his moments with Minzy and as grateful as Minzy should be , I was too. He really did make a positive change in her, it just he fell in the process...ah, a little bit of second lead syndrome just hit me in the feels. They're my otp so it's natural but I already accept the story's ship and definitely vouch for Mr and Mrs Wu!
But all that out the way, Minzy is right. After officially announcing her new position, there's danger. I'm scared for the future as I'm excited for it. So until your next update! I can't wait but I shall ♥ Ty for not abandoning this.
jiwonku #4
Chapter 20: Omaigad you update. The confession from kai. I cannt imagine that coming for, but im support him than yifan. Yifan is crazy, and im sad that minzy will never kai :( I really love kai and minzy coz yifan just crazy
alcyonne
#5
Chapter 20: I'M SCREAMING. I haven't read it yet but once i will, I will definitely comment!!! Ty for the update! ♥♥♥
alcyonne
#6
Chapter 19: New reader here! I see that you wrote this ages ago and I'm glad you updated causing me to stumble upon it. The description and foreword was already interesting since you decided to keep the male lead hidden, I admit it really piqued my interest. After finding out it was Yifan, I was definitely surprised, but I didn't hate the idea. Tbh, I love Minzy so much so I welcome all her ships. My babe is too underrated. Anyway, I didn't stop reading this until 3am! You could say I was hooked. The premise of drug rings and gangs is nothing new, but the way you handled it and made it yours was very apparent and I liked that a lot! It didn't make the story too predictable and you added your own twists. For example, Jongin's entry in the story! On the chapter he appeared, I legit flew from my bed because I did not expect it. I'm glad I trusted your words from earlier when you said his entry would be very significant, yet fitting. You were definitely right. Also Yifan/Minzy's relationship travelled a very rough road and I liked that. It was a nice touch of realism in the development of their relationship, giving the story more substance. Now that I've literally binged on this and reached the latest update, I'm happy that Yifan and Minzy finally reunited but at the same time, I'm curious how the story will go on from this. So I'll be waiting for the next update Authornim! Good luck! xoxo
Rosaloveskris #7
Chapter 19: Glad you are back. Love the chapter
jiwonku #8
Chapter 19: Hmmm i dont know how to express my feeling right now. Honestly i prefer kai for minzy since some chapter before. i dont mind kris but i dont believe it that minzy choose kris again. But after all i like this update, it is unpredictable
shaylove93
#9
New subbie cant wait ^_^
Rosaloveskris #10
Chapter 19: Omg you are back can't wait for the new chapter