Reconcile

Description

“Do you remember? We were young….we held hands….we danced in the rain….”

He takes his time to evoke, and I wonder if they are tears which I see rolling down his cheeks or the raindrops from above.

“I remember…” He replies and gently squeeze my hands. “Us holding hands, dancing in the rain…I remember…”

I move a little closer, almost touching, and smile.

“That’s what I like to recall”

Foreword

To you,
Whom I'm still chasing after
to reconcile.

 

 


This is my entry for 'Speak up your feeling' writing contest.

Prompt: JIN '너만 없다 (Gone)

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anegyu #1
Chapter 1: I'm crying, It makes my heart breaking T_T
A very good story, I love the way you write this... I'm waiting for your another story. Fighting author-nim :)
LOTUSKim #2
Chapter 1: Ahhhhh the story is really touching :( i was really suprised when the fact come out. They're sibling :( aww~ such a good story
Fighting!
LOTUSKim #3
Just read the descriprion, i can feel what's going on. Very cool!
rojan143suzy #4
Chapter 1: wow i love the descriptions, you tend to imagine softness of rose petal to getting drenched in the downpour. You can feel everything going on. I absolutely love your writing style. Hands down. Looking forward to your works. Thank you for writing so beautifully. I cried at the end.
momochan83
#5
Chapter 1: This is just so sad... but still good, glad I read it :)
jessikajean
#6
Chapter 1: I wasn't actually planning to comment, but you have to know that this story made me cry. Ah, seriously.