Chapter 1: Chapter 1: I think thid is a really good fic, you should really continue it!!! If i were to give any thoughts, i would say use easier words to understand, I couldn't really make up the story untill i got to the middle... Other than that i understood and went back and reread and it was good, you really should continue it!! Hope you even read my comment!! I aldo liked your story 'rainy with a chance of chanyeol' i can't really spell the first name, but yah i am trying to read more of your stories, and i stumbled across this fic and here i am giving my thoughts. Yah!!
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