Omg this is such a unique idea this faux canon thing oMF THIS IS BRILLIANT I LOVE IT OMG
This is ot12 right omg so cute how theyre all kinda sorta friends already i mean yeah except baeksoo omg but the idea of them debuting as a duo omg how cute is that i wANT IT SO BAD OMG A BAEKSOO SUBUNIT PLS HAHAHHAHA
IT'S 2016 AND I WANT SO MANY DIFFERENT SUBUNITS HAHAHHAHA ANYWAY
i think the dynamics are super intresting tho it was a little toxic... I thought it would be about competitiveness or pettiness or something trivial and irrelevant LIKE I WOULD HAVE UNDERSTOOD UNHEALTHY COMPETITION but all there was to it was disagreeing and annoying each other and i was so confused because if everyone around them was clearly seeing that the two of them have this spark what the hell was wrong......
I gotta say.... The confrontation scenes were the best. I really like confrontation scenes in general but in this fic it was so good like baek just pinning soo under him and he has his cactus and yixing is trying to stop them but tHEY WERE JUST SO VERBAL AND HONESTLY.... Their words were full of poison like damn.... I love that baek was the first o blow up tho because reading this fic youd expect that it was going to be soo. But baek exploding was just wowwww
Chenyeol doing the work of god wow let me give these two a hug thanks darlings i wonder what wouldve happened to baeksoo if not for this very unconventional and very annoying intervention. I loved this YESSSS HEHE
IN THE END THEY MANAGED TO WORK THINGS OUT AND ACCEPT THAT BEIH SO DIFFERENT FROM EACH OTHER DOESNT MEAN THEY HAVE TO BE AT EACH OTHERS THROATS ALL THE TIME, AND THEY CAN GIVE EACH OTHER A CHANCE BECAUSE THEY ARE SIMILAR IN WAYS WHETHER THEY LIKE IT OR NOT AND THEY CAN BE FRIENDS AND EVEN MORE AND
ing byun baekhyun hahahahahhaha
Aaah thanks for writing and sharing this! Super a+
Ps yixings proverbs.... -_____- and kris in general...... HAHAHAHAHHA

Chapter 1: Haha this is fun! Bickering and pranking chinguline is the best! Got lots of laugh today.. Thanks!

Btw the shock therapy is genius! Only these idiots can think of stupid things that actually work!

Hahaha :D that was funny!

Chapter 1: Hahahahahaha this was AWESOME

Chapter 1: this fanfic is pure goooold ; u ; sequel.. pls... pretty please hehe ;;

Chapter 1: Sequel please?

Chapter 1: This one is a gold....daebak....

Chapter 1: i agree... i want to know what happens next! i really loved how this developed and honestly that shock therapy bit was brilliant!! ..now..to play this song because i honestly am so out i need to remember how it goes

Chapter 1: How do you comment on this otl. I'd ask if Jongdae and Chanyeol were tipsy or something for that intervention but they're all drunk for like half the thing so. I really want a vocal line sub-unit now.

Chapter 1: Baekhyun's and Kyungsoo's wit.
I'm totally obsessed with this.
I need more. M O R E.