Chapter 1: I didn't got time to read it before now. Hahaha. . .*super emotionless laugh* It was so annoying since I read the foreword and was super excited to the story. (amazing form only two sentences. good job!)
But finally I got time to read it! And you didn't dissapoint me!
Even though I wouldn't have minded some background story on both Himchan and Gukkie, since I felt it would have added to the depth of the story.
But yes, it is a oneshot and the theme was maybe more towards the "love with a stranger" but it is just my oppinion. ^-^
Really liked this story though, angsty stuff. *thumbs up*
Must compliment you on how you setted the setting in the jazz club! Really amazing!
I don't know it felt like this one was a bit different from how you usually write it, but maybe it's just me, but I think it's really good!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR STORIES THEY MAKE MY MORNINGS (and evenings) SO AMAZING!
Chapter 1: Your writing style is beyond amazing, really depictive and beautiful... So great actually, that I won't complain about the bitter taste I have in my mouth after reading this - honestly - almost depressingly melancholic oneshot.
Chapter 1: This was absolutely beautiful. The wording was so lyrical and your choice of vocabulary fits perfectly with the story. The story built up pretty steadily and it was all so sweet that the ending really hit me hard >.< Great job! :D
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