The Last 60 Seconds

Description

It's the last 60 seconds before the music starts. The members of Super Junior are waiting to begin their concert. As they do, their minds drift. Just what do they think about right before a performance? Are they thinking of the coming song, or something deeper?

Foreword

This oneshot (by Aiko) is based off of a performance of Superman, where in the beginning, each member is on a platform and covered with a sheet. If you want to watch it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=49vdFQeGxxc&list=PL6F155E5DCC5AE79A&index=17&feature=plpp

This was actually really hard to write; it took me four days. I'm still relatively new to Super Junior, so I might have gotten some of their personalities wrong, but I hope you like it anyways!

=) Aiko

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EunDooKyu #1
Beautiful interpretation of that mysterious few moments n an amazing capture of their feelings . Wow !
unnilovesKYU #2
I love this so much. It's exactly how they would all be thinking behind those sheets. Good job! :)
cherry1001 #3
wow! this is amazing! it made me teary-eyed! Super Junior <3
idticd #4
this was a really great oneshot! it doesn't sound like you're new to suju (then again, i'm not an elf, but still.) because i was touched by each of their POVs- especially leeteuk's. good job! :D
angelsmiles #5
I got kinda teary eyed reading this cause Heechul left for the army today :/
quexiyun #6
Ooo! Beautiful, just like the song! Don't worry about the hyung thing, you'll get it sooner or later xD <br />
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Lovely! Toobad it was just a oneshot, I'll look forward to anything else you write :D
SweetLikeHersheys #7
Ohmaigatsun, Aiko. Wow. O_O<br />
I absolutely LOVED it!! It was SO well-written, I can see that you got right into their minds. I love how Donghae's thinking about his dad- did you get that from my e-mail?? Every single one was amazing, but i think I'm obsessed with Leeteuk's POV. It's so touching how he worries about every member. He's such a great leader, he takes such good care of them all and he's gonna leave soon *sobs in the corner* I'll be so upset to see him go. But Kangin's hopefully coming back soon, YAY FOR BEAR KANGIN. I'm getting off-topic... Anyway, I was surprised to see Sungmin so worried about Heenim! It was cute! I also liked how Shindong tries to cheer up Leeteuk, and Eunhyuk's cuz...he's Eunhyuk mah bias XD. Donghae's is sad and so sweet, and Wookie has a bro?? How am I an E.L.F and NOT KNOW THAT???? GAH.<br />
My main point is, yes. You did an amazing beyond amazing job. I love the title, I love the last line (so epic), I loved the pic, and I miss Heechul like freaking crazy. (I'm still mourning the loss of his hair to the razor...)Kyuhyun IS an evil maknae...but he has such a gorgeous voice and I'm glad he's still singing onstage. 2007 . And lol, Onew checking Kyu's Starcraft. If he didn't save it...the world shall end as we know it.<br />
Oh, and I laughed my off at Siwon's prayers to the Lord.<br />
Kudos to you! Unnie is proud!<br />
~Jaiya <3 <3 <3
chennet #8
This was absolutely beautiful <3 So strong and powerful, with a little laugh here and there~ It's perfectly chosen to match this one shot up with Superman <3 This is seriously epic~ And don't worry about the hyung thing, it's a bit confusing trust me, it took me a good few days to perfect the fact of it :I
AmudoBun #9
I'm like WOW. I really like this...
quexiyun #10
Sounds interesting! Updat e soon :D oh, and 2 subscribers...and 0 views?,?!?!?
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