Specks of Stardust

Description

To everyone else, it was just a game. But to him, it wasn't just some activity that he wanted to play. No, it was a way of release. But is it really when you can't help but feel ambivalent about it? Because if it wasn't just a game, he'd definitely be alright with it. Definitely.

 

 

Because deep in the corners is where I find comfort in.

And sometimes it does feel a bit lonely.

But when the dark wallows you up and you can barely scream or whisper.

What else are you meant to do?

Run

But will you ever find your way out?

Foreword

"One, two, three,"

[It's a shame that no-one tries to find me]

 

"Four, five, six,"

[Take me out of my abyss]

 

"Seven, eight, nine,"

[Anytime now]

 

"Ten! Here I come!"

[But will you really?]

 


An entry for boxes-'s contest: t h e f e e l s • a writing contest

Prompt 010: "i love hide and seek. too bad no one ever tries to find me. "

 

Start: 21-04-14

End: 02-06-14

 

Credits to Anya from MORDRED - graphic shop for the awesome poster and background! 

 

Divergin1004
updated! :3 last chapter guyth! :'c

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readytofly
#1
Chapter 9: Sooooo good, authornim :P
NotAppropriate
#2
Chapter 8: OK initially I was confused out of my wits, but then confusion turns to intrigue and I was too darn curious to stop reading. This was, by far, my most favorite chapter. The 'a-ha' moment, the eureka, where Jongin searched within himself and finally grew up a bit. It was ironic that when he chose to keep on running, he was actually two steps ahead from everyone, in terms of fueling his own insecurities and paranoia that he wasn't needed. There are so many great wonderful things I'd like to say about this chapter, but words just escape me. Because it also taught me a thing or two, about life and taking charge of it instead of hiding away in your own presumptions that the world should find you vs you meeting it. So, thank you mysterious ahjussi and his magical specks of stardust for lighting the path of wisdom in Jongin's pretty head..and mine. //Was he an angel or fairy godfather?// And naturally, thanks to your intelligent and interesting writing, of course!
JonnyEvans
#3
Chapter 5: I HOPE JONGIN WON'T KILL ANYONE!
Or was that birthday surprise party?
Hope so
I'm falling in love with your story, thank you for update :D
chodoiino #4
Chapter 5: omg why are they all being so mean im so scared. Thnku for the mention btw cutie ^^
chodoiino #5
Chapter 4: This is really mysterious omg. I'm worried
jiosne #6
Can't wait for this!