Chapter 17: love it!!!!!!!!

Chapter 17: it was good!
like others said, new paragraphs would help comprehension
there's other grammar/spelling stuff, but it's not a huge deal
they're all so dorky lol

Chapter 17: really love it!!!!!!
can't wait for the next story

Chapter 17: first chap is up~~ yeayyyyy~~~!!!good one though it was confusing, just like the others said :P
aigooo~ they're so dorky yet sweet~~ :* keke i love this group~ i'm shipping ahreum x jini & lars x wonjin already..!! adorableee~~ <3

Chapter 17: True true like myheartstainedblue said it wpild be easier to read if it was like that.

But I still liked it and you totally got the twins right. Hyun Ok very childish and Hyun Ki very adult like lol.

Good job author-nim! (^^)v

Chapter 17: Wow.Chap one! author-nim, it will be easier to read if u started a new conversation in a new paragraph.^^
Eg;
'Buy me a water bottle!" he demanded.

"No. " she.refused.crossing her arms.

Chapter 15: Woohoo, Empire is complete~ ^^
Can't wait for the story to start. :)

And if you still need an actress for the girls I think Eileen would fit. c:

Chapter 15: Black is pretty! Hwaiting!

Chapter 15: yayyy!! empire is now compelete!! congrats to our black <3 she's indeed, a pretty girl~