A Day With Your Bias?

Imagine: A Nightmare with Your Bias

It was your first day at college and you can't help it but to get excited because it's the day that you will prove your independence not only to your parents, but also to yourself. Your mother wanted to accompany you in fear that you might get lost but you insisted that you wouldn't. Your father has confidence that you can do it by yourself and so do you.

 


 

It was a thirty minute ride from a public vehicle before arriving at the train station. But since the engine went down before you even reach the station, you had no choice but to walk past the Grand Arc to get to the station. It was a tiring journey but you didn't mind it because you thought that walking will help you exercise your legs. Upon passing the Grand Arc, you noticed someone that made you stop for a moment. You knew him from somewhere and you knew that you are not mistaken. With a determined will, you went to him and poked his left shoulder. His perfectly swiped bangs bounces a bit as he turned to look to you.

 

"Yes?" he asks in the familiar voice you always hear everytime you watch him in his MVs.

"A-Are you ___________?" you asked with a nervous voice.

 

He got a little surprised as you pronounced his name perfectly. He responded with a nod which made you draw your lips into a grin. Your mind had been blown by the fact that you were talking to him but you calmed yourself so that you could do more things with him. You picked up the courage to ask where he was heading to and he answers it with a smile.

 

"Umm... Do you kind if we... g-go together?" you offered while crossing your fingers behind you.

"Yeah. I don't mind~" he replied sweetly.

 

You jumped in joy as he said those words. You tugged his hand and the two of you crossed the street happily to get to the station. Many people were passing by here and there but his eyes were fixed in your figure only. You took notice of this and asks him why he was staring at you like that.

 

"Nothing~" was his short but sweet reply.

 

The two of you kept walking up the overpass until you reached the train station. You looked around for the ticket booth but he already pulled you towards one. There are several people in the line so you have to wait patiently behind him. He noticed the fact that he was in front so he immediately pulls you to his place instead. You didn't got a chance to fight back because you find this act to cute and manly so you just let it. When you came in front of the ticket booth, the lady suddenly offers you something.

 

"Would you like to try our special offer for today, ma'am? It's a new train you'll have to ride and but we assure that we can get you on your destination as fast as a lightning bolt."

 

You looked towards your companion and asks him about it. Since he wouldn't mind about trying a new train, you agreed as well and bought the tickets for it. The two of you then went to the platform to wait for the new train. As you wait, you noticed that not much people are waiting on the platform and you could easily count them by the fingers. They were five; including you. Suddenly, a voice calls your name from behind. You looked over your shoulder and smiled. It was your best friend from High School. You were startled for a while but you immediately recognized her except for a few features that changed in her. You welcomed her with a hug and excitedly asks her about her summer. You also introduced your bias to her which made her excited as well because she also took a liking to him thanks to your influence. As you were talking, your train has arrived and the doors opened. Nobody noticed that all of you in the platform entered in one cabin.

 

The train was pretty empty and there were three persons inside when you entered. Oddly enough, they all looked like your bias from the other KPOP groups. You went towards each of them and asks them their names. They all responded with a "yes" as you pronounced their names. Both you and your best friends got excited because it was them who they are riding the train with. You jumped in joy as you realized it and asks the other passangers as well. But as you jumped in joy, the train suddenly stopped and you bumped to another person; a man in his fifties, you thought. He was wearing a brown coat and a face mask so you can't really tell. You told him a thousand apologies but he said that it was okay. He stood up after I apologized to him but he told you something before he went off of the train.

 

"Be sure you have prepared something for Show and Tell" is what he said.

 

It left you curious but it was forgotten easily because you are talking with your bias at those times. You were so immersed with talking with them that you didn't entertained your best friend anymore. She felt so left alone so he sat on the corner, in front of another person you knew as well. He was your ultimate bias but you didn't talked to him because their group haven't had any comebacks in the past three years so you really don't know what to say to him. Out of the blue, your best friend started saying some hurtful words to him. All of you became startled as she started screaming on his face so you stood up to calm her down but she drove you away and grabbed him by the collar. The others tried to stop her but to no avail. Her eyes were blood red and her face was painted with anger. You saw your Ultimate Bias struggling underneath her grasp and you can't even do anything to stop it. In one moment, the train stop in the middle of the tracks and you all lost consciousness.

 


 

After a few minutes, you were awaken by the roaring of the train's engine. You opened your eyes and found yourself being bound on the train seats. All of the other were bound as well; only your best friend was not. She was saying something about being killed and other things that you cannot understand because of the sound of the train's engine. It was a short split second but the next thing you knew, your best friend was lying on the floor, her head rolled under one of the seats. You looked there with a terrified expression and one of your bias looked up and saw a large blade swinging from the train's ventilation system. You could hear some of them cursing and struggling from the binds. You squirmed around, trying to get out from the binds as well. One of your companions managed to get out and he reached for the train conductor's room.

 

"_________ WATCH OUT!!!" you screamed.

 

You saw another blade coming out of the ventilation system and was swinging towards him. You screamed for him but he didn't get to dodge it in time. His body was cut cleanly in half and the conductor's room was painted with his crimson blood. This time, you can't help it but to scream out of fright. You could feel your eyes watering because of the gruesome scenery you just watched.

 

"T-That is it! I'm going to stop this train!" one said as he take off his binds and dodged all the blades that was swinging to and fro inside the train.

 

You were relieved that he wasn't hurt from the blades. He was a skilled martial artist and he always show it off in their performances and MVs. You were confident that he will end this bizzare plight.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But you were wrong.

 

 

As he pushed some of the buttons on the conductor's room, your other companions started screaming in pain. One of them was lifted up by the neck before he was brought down to be impaled by a sharp spear. The other was burned alive in his seat while he was screaming wildly. You thought it was ironic because he was often associated with water; his superpower according to their fandom. But it wasn't long when he was silenced as the fire continued to eat his perfect body away. All that was left was his ashes. Not long after that, you found your other bias wriggling in pain as his eyes were being pierced and forcefully pulled out from their places. His binds went loose automatically and trudges towards you in pain. His voice was full of fear unlike back in the days when you were still watching him dance and do rap. His now powerful voice was drowned with panic and horror as he cups around his surroundings.

 

"H-HELP ME!!! HELP ME!!!" he repeated.

 

He stumbled down the train's floor where a saw suddenly appeared. He could hear its roar but he didn't know where to run. In panic, he ran towards it which shredded his body in a few seconds. The one inside the conductor's room was too terrified as well to do anything. He watched the horrendous act in disbelief. As he was about to leave the room, the doors suddenly closed and you could hear him scream out for help. In a while, these screams became screams of pain for the room was showered with boiling acid from nowhere. You can't do anything but to cry to see your bias being torn apart and be killed. When the door opened once again, only a skeleton with a few muscle tissues came out. The acid came out crawling like poison and you yelled desperately for help as the train run on the tracks.

 

The saw running back and forth on the floor, the blades swinging to and fro from the ceiling, the fire burning endlessly on one of the seat, the acid crawling out of the room and the dead bodies around of you. It was a horrifying night for you and the only ones left with you is your Ultimate Bias who was left staring at you. The train stopped and you glanced at him in despair. Your breath was hitching and your face is flushed. Your uniform was stained with the red blood of your best friend and your bias. He suddenly stood up and walked towards you. You didn't know what to do but he walked to you with calm. He bent down to your face and stared into your eyes.

 

"Be sure you have prepared something for Show and Tell~" he whispered with a smirk.

 

You were confused with what he said but the next thing you saw was decomposing face filled with the earth and some worms. You screamed in horror and shakes your head uncontrollably as the train started to run once again. Cold hands cupped your cheeks but you continued to yell and shout and shut your eyes tight.

 

"Don't you want oppa's goodnight kiss, ________?" a soft voice asks.

 

When you opened your eyes, you still found his horrendous face in front of you together with the others who were just killed. Each of them are whispering your name in creepy voices and you could feel more hands creeping their way on your face. Your screams and shouts went louder and louder as the train continued to run on the tracks.

 



owari~♥

 

^_^ I hope it made sense... ><

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bowrair #1
So the imagery and the creepiness was super creepy. Like a stranger's finger's tickling your back creepy. /shudders/
But I couldn't help but feel like the story didn't really have suspense or the horror feeling to it. It was more that the actual events, not the writing that made it creepy. I would encourage you to use varying sentence structure to help elicit more feeling from the writing. :)
Also the use of "you" was overused. Like in some instances "you" could have been replaced. This can also occur if you add more variations of sentences.
In general, I had to read some sentences twice because the grammar did interrupt my understanding of the text. Its ok when the grammar is lacking, but not bad enough to understand what is written. But once it becomes difficult to understand the actual writing, like yours is, improving grammar is really recommended.
The biases seemed oddly specific...? For an imagine story, that is... I wasn't really able to relate to a lot of them. I think I could only find one I could name, so improving on making it intriguing without making it specific is a must.
Because the imagery from the story was from a real nightmare, It's no surprise that it could have made a person squirm by its creepiness.
So I'll applaud you on being able to describe the nightmare as thoroughly as you did, if anything.
In conclusion, I feel if you improved on your grammar and use of varying sentences you would see a lot of improvement. In addition, future imagine stories should be less specified, so a more broad audience can relate to it! :)
I hope this helps! :)
NuttyChocolate
#2
Chapter 2: OMG, this story is really my style!! I love it, keep it up author-nim ^^
BangYoungji #3
Chapter 2: creepy but i like it <3
Kimjinchan #4
Chapter 1: creepy,if i was u authornim i would cry
Requiem07 #5
Thanks for the comment~ ^^ I really had that dream... but it included my friends and my crush replaced my ultimate bias~~ >< I woke up sweating that day~
JHNDAE
#6
Chapter 1: This is..... creepy... you made me afraid of dreaming about my bias.... ahahaha great story!!
gaebiiii
#7
Chapter 1: Woah.. this is scary and creepy..
blackmelody
#8
Chapter 1: Wow this is great!
curli91 #9
Chapter 1: Well. That was creepy. In a nice way though