Chapter 8: Heyyyy, saw the review! Thanks a lot for doing it :D
Yeahhh, I really need to find myself a beta reader, hahaha.
Anyway, have a good day! :D
Chapter 8: Hi! Thank you for the review! I've read it through and I really appreciate you doing it! Thank you for pointing out the grammar in the description. And yeah, haha, another review shop also told me the excerpt was 'wrong'. I just wanted it to stay as one blurb instead of scattering it. Oops, bad choice?
Best,
Epione
Chapter 9: thank you so much for the review! yep, i should add more descriptive details i think. i'm just... horrible at making sentences. i'm still working on the grammar thing, i will get it fixed after i've finished the other things.
uhm, i think i might have problem about describing his writing style thought.
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