Chapter Three

Withered Memories

Award-winning artist, Na Hyun Jung, spotted at movie premiere; rumors of romance surfaces anew

(via Star News) – One of Korea’s most-loved artists, Na Hyun Jung, once again raised quite a stir with her stunning appearance at yesterday’s star-studded movie premiere starring wonder boy, Hong Chan Doo. The enigmatic Ms. Na stepping out on the red carpet looking strikingly divine in an understated white gown and was promptly escorted down by none other than the man-of-the-hour himself, the dashing Mr. Hong.

Although the appearance was somewhat to be expected, the resulting fanfare was enough to revive once more the persistent speculations about the possible romantic relationship between the two. It has been a well-known fact that Ms. Na and Mr. Hong have had a very close relationship since Mr. Hong’s pre-debut days, with a few reliable insiders dating the friendship back to their high school years.

Representatives from both parties have avoided giving out an official statement like before, refusing to neither confirm nor deny the long-standing rumor, but the netizens are convinced that the gorgeous-looking pair is indeed seei each other. Some netizens have commented -

 

 

The curious article disappeared from the screen with a single click.

 

“Hyun Jung and Chan Doo are together now, huh?” Baek Hyun leaned back heavily on his seat.

 

Truthfully, reading the whole article detailing the possible romance between his two friends didn’t seem like a good idea at the moment. Last night’s revelation was surprisingly uncomfortable enough, and conflicting thoughts have continuously plagued him ever since.

 

Another sleepless night was not what he needed.

 

 “Since when did that happen?”

 

“If you want a real answer, then you should ask them that yourself,” the voice from the other side of the room dryly retorted as Baek Hyun continued to stare contemplatively at the blank screen. “Wait a minute. You didn’t just come all the way here to ask me that, did you?”

 

Baek Hyun quickly twirled himself on the office chair to face his friend.

 

“Aniya. It’s not like that at all,” he sheepishly scratched the back of his head.

 

The two of them had spent most of the time idly chatting inside Bong Goo’s slightly cramped office at the back of his clinic, but now it seemed as though the conversation was getting more and more about the other two particular people instead.

 

“I really wanted to see how you were doing.”

 

“You know, when Pulip called me earlier this morning to say that she was going to drop you off here, I honestly thought she was kidding,” Bong Goo admitted, finally looking up from the small stack of papers he was filing away from across the room. “But it looks like you’re really back.”

 

Dropping the last of his documents inside the metal drawer, Bong Goo turned to him with a questioning look. “You are back for good, right? I mean, this isn’t just a vacation or something?”

 

Baek Hyun confirmed with a small nod. “Found an opening at the university hospital in downtown Seoul. I’m starting on Monday.”

 

“Good. You’ve been gone too long, Baek Hyun-ah.” Bong Goo added with a small shrug, leaning against the drawer. “I didn’t think you’d actually want to come back.”

 

His gaze traveled to the inconspicuous picture frame resting on top of Bong Goo’s wooden office table. An unconscious smile formed in his lips. His friend looked as cheerful as he’d last seen him back years ago, though this time Baek Hyun thought it may have something to do with the cute and equally cheerful woman who was in the picture with him.

 

“Is there nothing for me to come back to?” Baek Hyun muttered under his breath.

 

“Aigoo, don’t be ridiculous. Of course you’re always welcome to come back here.” Bong Goo adjusted his glasses and flashed him a goofy smile. “But you know, things change. It’s not the same as when you were last here.”

 

“I can see that.” He motioned towards the picture frame and cocked an eyebrow. “So when am I going to meet the person who wriggled her way to Oh Bong Goo’s heart?”

 

“Or did she get there through your stomach?” jokingly, Baek Hyun added, leaning closer to give him a conspiratorial smile.

 

Just then, the door to the small office burst open, catching them both by surprise.

 

“Yah! Oh Bong Goo, you little rascal! Is there anything you forgot to tell us about?”

 

The unexpected intrusion made him straighten in his seat. Just as if they were back in high school, Baek Hyun opened his mouth to give the apparent trouble-maker a piece of his own mind but stopped short as soon as he recognized the person who had stepped inside the room.

 

“Oh! Could you please stop scaring me like that?” Breathing heavily, Bong Goo dropped the hand that had been clutching his chest when he saw who it was.

   

Chan Doo strode in casually inside the tiny office, oblivious to Bong Goo’s distress and apparently, even to Baek Hyun’s presence.

 

Baek Hyun took the opportunity to take a closer look. Aside from his sharper, more mature features and sturdier frame, Chan Doo almost looked the same – still as impeccably dressed, and still as neatly groomed as he’d last seen him. Chan Doo was still very much the pretty boy he remembered back then.

 

“When were you planning to let us know about your impeding marriage?”

 

“Mwo-mworago? Who told you that?”

 

If that wasn’t enough to catch everyone inside the room off-guard, the other person piping up from behind surely did.

 

“No one. We didn’t really get to interrogate Jinah when we bumped into her on our way here this morning, although that blinding thing on her finger kinda gave away the hint.”

 

As expected, the distinctively husky yet lilting voice belonged to the same person with deep, piercing eyes he saw yesterday.

 

Baek Hyun’s heart raced.

 

“Bong Goo-yah, did you seriously think that no one is going to notice it when a girl is wearing a flashy ring like that?” She clucked her tongue at her friend.

 

If possible, Hyun Jung looked even more striking up close, and Baek Hyun tried his best to remember if this really was the same girl he once found burdensome and annoying.

 

No, she wasn’t a girl anymore, he reminded himself. Standing right in front of him was a very beautiful woman – thin, pink lips twisted into a teasing smile; warm, chocolate eyes twinkling in mischief; rich, dark hair cascading gently way past her shoulders.

 

“I didn’t think you’d be…”

 

But all that seemed to have slowly melted into one inscrutable mask as soon as she noticed the third presence.

 

She stared at him, not a hint of emotion in her once delicate face.

 

Words appeared to have escaped him for a moment, and he couldn’t do anything but stare right back.

 

“A-ah… Chan Doo-yah, Hyun Jung-ah, I forgot to tell you…” Bong Goo started, trying hard not to stutter despite of the abrupt awkwardness that settled inside the small office. Swiftly, he shuffled over to where Baek Hyun was sitting and stood between them.

 

“Baek Hyun is ba– ”

 

“Wait, Hyun Jung-ah! I just…” The chair almost toppled over as Baek Hyun shot to his feet. He finally found his voice at the last moment, but it was all too little, too late.

 

Hyun Jung had already stalked out of the room, without a single word or even another look back.

 

It was Chan Doo who finally broke the deafening silence.

 

“Actually, we only dropped by here to visit Mindol on our way to the gallery,” he lightly explained, referring to the injured mutt Bong Goo had been nursing back to health in his clinic. “Hyun Jung just wanted to give the toy she bought the other day.”

 

“Look, Chan Doo-yah, I know I owe both of you an apology – ”

 

“We really should be going now.” Chan Doo effectively cut him off, a small, polite smile playing on his lips.

 

“Bong Goo-yah, don’t forget to send us the invitations, alright?” He turned to his other friend who only wordlessly nodded. With one last look back, Chan Doo offered him his last parting words.

 

“Welcome back, Hwang Baek Hyun.”

 

He slumped back on the chair with a grunt, running his fingers through his hair in frustration.

 

“You shouldn’t take it against them, Baek Hyun. Things change; people change.” Bong Goo finally spoke after a few seconds. “Those two…. A lot has happened since you’ve been gone, so don’t take it against them.”

 

Change.

 

Baek Hyun was really starting to hate that word.

 

“You’ll also get your chance to properly talk to Chan Doo and Hyun Jung, eventually.” He crossed the short distance between them to give Baek Hyun a reassuring pat on the shoulder.

 

“Pulip did.”

 

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A/N: I wasn't originally planning to do this, but I'll cut off this chapter right here so that I could ask you guys: are my chapters too long? Or too short? I couldn't be too sure because it looks longer than when I type it. This chapter is roughly around 1.4K words (and this was supposed to be just a third of the original one). Do you want it to be longer? Or is this length okay? The reason I'm asking  all these is because I don't want to assault your eyes with too much text, but I also don't want to make the story as dragging as it is. Please tell me your thoughts, yeah?

Anyway, I think this answers the question about Baek Hyun's companion. The next chapter is going to be a continuation of this one.  :)

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LiNafied
#1
Chapter 3: Chandoo+HyunJung sounds pretty good right now <3
seunghoismine
#2
Chapter 3: Update pleaseee,
Please make this to be hyunjung-baekhyun couple please
Weirxfangirl #3
Chapter 2: Yeaaahhhh make this chandooxhyunjung pairing in the story please :DDDD
quenzie11 #4
Chapter 3: PLEASE UPDATE SOOON!! X(
The long chapter is okay cuz i don't like short un's
yangdee18
#5
Chapter 3: i checked on the jiyeon subscriptions i had and i found this.
gosh the old stories are way nicer than the new ones -.-
update soon though! i just love how it works for my otp c:
cheap_imitation #6
(omg I promise last comment - I'm so sorry for how wordy I am HAHA)

I especially love the little insight we've already been given into mature Hyunjung and Chandoo. Not gonna lie, I fist-pumped and screamed mentally "you go girl!" when Hyunjung went all cold on Baekhyun. It sets up so much angst and now that we're given a present-day relationship that is SO far beyond their old one in high school, it makes the journey of revisiting the past 8 years even more fulfilling.
I can't help but anticipate the change in dynamics, interactions and relationships now that all five of our 'kids' have grown up and experienced life.

I'm so happy for Bong Goo!!! He was always the cool one tbh - was a friend to everyone, loved food and against all odds succeeded. But I guess because he was never truly apart of that strange love square, it would be a struggle to carve out his own character and story arc. I do hope that while he has found happiness and a partner, he will have some presence in this story.

Things I'm looking forward to
- insight into Hyunjung and Chandoo's world and their inner thoughts.
- a look into the past 8 years
- progression in Baekhyun/Hyunjung's relationship past and present. If he does start to develop feelings for her, I would appreciate insight as to why or how. Sometimes it is as simple as "just because" or seeing her in a new light but given their history and how their high school relationship was portrayed, I must admit I will need plenty of buildup, internal reasoning and motivation that can justify a change in heart from Baekhyun.
- confrontation now that Baekhyun has returned!! woot woot :D

Most importantly though - I just want to say that as a reader I am so grateful to have come across this. I just hope that you haven't completely abandoned it. I get that life generally gets in the way but you do have something pretty special here and it'd be a shame to just never revisit it. Hopefully, you can find some motivation to continue!!
cheap_imitation #7
(continued).

Admittedly I am a HUGE Hyunjung-Baekhyun shipper so reading those teasers of Baekhyun's obvious interest and attraction for Hyunjung does give me the ~feelz~ lol but given how the drama portrayed these two, I did at first find it strange that he was the one showing outward signs of affection. I like that you switched it up and huge kudos for actually making it believable for me. You've made it clear that he views Hyunjung differently but haven't yet given the reason or motivation behind this change and you've kept his interest vague and not some huge declaration. My pet peeve is Baekhyun suddenly waking up one day in love with Hyunjung tbh. Though I say this with the assumption and interpretation that these two are the main endgame couple. I crey if I got it all wrong haha.
I also LOVE the side friendships: Baekhyun-Pulip & esp. Chandoo-Hyunjung. It was rare but I was one of those Baekhyun/Hyunjung shippers that enjoyed his friendship and crush on Pulip. It's so true to highschool life and it only serves to give my otp more potential for angst (which I'm a er for).
Baekhyun needing Pulip as a friend doesn't negate his feelings for Hyunjung so thank you for portraying that and hopefully you'll continue to build a lovely platonic male-female friendship. Again, I'll shrivel up in embarrassment if your endgame happens to be these two instead LOL.
As for Chandoo-Hyunjung. LOVELOVELOVELOVE (their friendship/pseudo-romance). I adored these two in the drama but always got a bff vibe from them. They were always the more optimistic and bubblier halves to Baekhyun-Pulip. I always thought that the steadfast support and positivity Hyunjung provided for Bakehyun paralleled Chandoo's support for Pulip.
I'm INTRIGUED and deathly curious about their set-up because it smells like a cover-up. I love that they both pursued and excelled in their passions for the arts and that they seemingly have become one another's support.
cheap_imitation #8
Imagine my surprise upon finding this gem - a god of study centred fanfic that is well written and holds great promise of having properly fleshed out characters and an actual narrative with themes! I really enjoyed the drama some years ago and found that while the kids were a little "stock-like" throughout the series, they had so much potential to be moulded in fiction, especially as adults post-college.
I was engaged and taking in every word, my surprise slowly becoming admiration and relief that your story was shaping up to be as good as I initially suspected. Only then, I came to the end of a short three chapters and now I'm just sulking (like a spoilt child) over having been handed a treat only for it to be taken prematurely away.

Never think your chapters are too long!! I've made it pretty obvious that what we have so far is simply not enough haha. And in future - don't be concerned about the length of chapters based on the assumption that readers simply don't want to see blocks of words; write these chapters tailored to the length that best fits your story and what you're trying to get across. Don't end the chapter at a point unless it feels natural to you as the writer and for the narrative at large :) Having said that I do think the last chapter ended at a good point.
You're in complete creative control so stick to your convictions and trust in your skills to deliver the story you want!

Ok - onto things I loved. I appreciate that you're writing in prose and not script-like dialogue (that a lot of GoS fics tend to favour. Not a bad thing, just not my style of fanfic).
I always feel that in choosing to write in 3rd person prose, it allows us to get a much better idea of these characters, their thoughts, motivations and makes for the relationships much more engaging and believable. So thank you for that. I love your Baekhyun - not much has been dished out in terms of his past just yet but I already get a feel of the kind of man he is now.
picturesques
#9
asdfghjkl- i like this story ;; /is not the type to comment on stories
please update soon c:
ice_cream_1996
#10
Chapter 3: i don't care how long the chapters
are. You wrote very well so it doesn't matter. Please update soon. I love your story <3 <3 <3