Chapter 1: This. i feel so many feels oh my god. This was so beautifully written and it feels so realistic. The way you write is really amazing, its very engaging and ugh, just absolutely lovely. I really wish i could write like this so my creative writings for prelims wouldn't sound like they've been written by a 6 year old -.- you did an awesome job ♡♡

Chapter 1: How come people don't read this? This should be everywhere. Like seriously, I'm gonna pester all the kaisoo shippers to read this one. Incredible.. :)

Omo, so little comments on such a masterpiece! The moment I saw the letters, I was unconvinced. But then I started reading, and I'm enchanted. Your seemingly "blank page" when looked at, holds so many emotions, small gestures, short, but perfectly fitting words. This is exactly what I appreciate the most in any kind of art; the uniqueness of the thought and the ability to play with words, to make them tell a story without too much "fillers", hollow words. If you're able to touch the heart of your reader by just few words, yet so perfectly constructed, you're truly an author, an artist. It's extremely rare to find such talent among people writing in english language, therefore I'm honored. Thank you ♥

Chapter 1: It's really painful when I read the part where kyungsoo imagining himself dancing with jongin.

Now I'm ugly crying because of your beautiful words T_T

Chapter 1: While reading this im listening 'my turn to cry' and like the title of the song i cried,, the story was sad,. But thumbs up for this

Chapter 1: Okay, first things first.
This looked so simple and undone when I first clicked on it. And then I began to read the story.

I just, can't find words for this, I'm so sorry. I want to spill out my feelings I got from this text but I simply can't.
The way you use symbolism, the tone, the sentences going back and forth (omg I make no sense) is just brutally beautiful.

I just can't. This story was just very cruel and brutal to read but hopeful too I think in a way.
But I just don't know what to do with myself now.

"It is because of this change that I have now decided to live my life beneath the shadow of a drug induced haze. However, as of late, I've been having trouble convincing this shadow that I’m someone worth following." I adored this part. It was so strong and. . . I can't anymore.

This was amazing.
And I'm sorry I couldn't get a fraction out of what I wanted to say.

Thank you.

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/692233/love-will-always-win-yoona-exo-chen-kris-kyungsoo-exosnsd-kai00exo And this one is good too :P

Where's the story? :)