A Good Morning

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Yoochun reflects on his time spent with Junsu as a couple after the two have had their first intimate experience....

Foreword

This was originally done as a request a long time ago, back in 2013. I am now uploading it to my new AFF account. Enjoy~ 

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Amalya #1
Chapter 1: D'aw. This is ridiculously cheesy and all too cute. haha You paint a very beautiful picture with them lying in bed and Yoochun's observations are almost poetic in your delivery. You've also done a nice and succinct job of outlining their relationship and how this actually came to be so that it's entirely believable and more real in that respect for it.

It's impossible to miss the tender regard Yoochun has for Junsu as he simply thinks about their time together before and during that morning. My only concern is that you sort of switch tenses near the end, going from past tense and thoughtfully introspective to present tense and active, though Junsu still experiences things in the past tense. lol

Otherwise, it's short, sweet, and very enjoyable. Well done!
shaeneice #2
Chapter 1: Awwww! Cute!
sarahleto #3
I love it!!
snagpaper #4
Chapter 1: this is just too much sugar, aww sweet
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