Dawning Affections

A Good Morning
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Yoochun stretches his tired limbs, yawning slightly as he smiles over at the sight of the one and only Kim Junsu, brilliantly placed alongside him in the bed, unmade covers pooling around his waist, his milky skin practically reflecting the dawning sunshine from the window nearby. The sight of the one you love in the morning is really something to marvel at. Yoochun was briefly caught up in simply staring at the man he knew and loved so much. 
Last night, the two had taken the final steps and now Junsu and Yoochun knew each other so intimately and completely that nothing could compare. Their love was an eternal one that would last beyond anything the group had ever and would ever face. 
With the new decision that all of JYJ would be enlisting into the army this year, Junsu had, albeit shyly, asked if he could experience this with Yoochun before they left. The two had been inseparable for years upon years, literally a solid unit since debut. They’d only been dating seriously since a short while ago though and as such, had taken baby steps in their relationship. 
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Amalya
#1
Chapter 1: D'aw. This is ridiculously cheesy and all too cute. haha You paint a very beautiful picture with them lying in bed and Yoochun's observations are almost poetic in your delivery. You've also done a nice and succinct job of outlining their relationship and how this actually came to be so that it's entirely believable and more real in that respect for it.

It's impossible to miss the tender regard Yoochun has for Junsu as he simply thinks about their time together before and during that morning. My only concern is that you sort of switch tenses near the end, going from past tense and thoughtfully introspective to present tense and active, though Junsu still experiences things in the past tense. lol

Otherwise, it's short, sweet, and very enjoyable. Well done!
shaeneice
#2
Chapter 1: Awwww! Cute!
sarahleto
#3
I love it!!
snagpaper
#4
Chapter 1: this is just too much sugar, aww sweet