Chapter 1: Aww he came back! And he can speak now (': I guess he probably went for treatment when he disappeared then? There seems to still be quite a bit of mystery around L, why he doesn't like using his real name and why he got distracted... Like there's a back story? Or maybe it's just me ^^" I understand if you're leaving it to the reader's imagination heh.
I like the details you included though, which make it more realistic.
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