The 16 famous celestials/immortals

Description

Main Cast
The girls
Jade/Julia 19years old, bubbly (though she can get too serious at times), loves to joke around and have fun, pretty, controls thunder and air.
Emerald/Emma 19years old,  bubbly (she can get really angry if anyone close to her gets hurt), loves to travel, mature, controls water and wind.
Moon/Merlissa 19years old, bubbly, pretends to be clueless to avoid getting hurt, cute, controls fire and love.
Marble/Manali 19 years old, bubbly, likes to think logically at all times, controls earth and metal.
 

The boys
Leeteuk 20 years old, likes to joke around, controls thunder and air.
Hangeng 20 years old, cold around girls, controls water and wind.
Kyuhyun 20years old, likes teasing people (especially Moon), controls fire and love.
Ryewook  20 years old, cute and sweet, controls earth and metal.


Minor Characters
The girls
Rebecca 19 years old controls wood.
Olivia 19 years old controls metal.
Jessica 19years old, controls poison.
Yuhan 19years old, controls emotions.

The boys
T.O.P 20years old, controls wood.
Seungri 20years old, controls poison.
Jonghyun 20years old, controls emotions.
Minho 20years old, control metal.


Extra Characters
Messenger
The dark one
Alwin (servant of the dark one)
Lucy (servant of the dark one)
(some other characters may appear in the story) 

 

Outline of the Plot:
16 celestials were sent down to earth by the jade emperor to protect it from the underworld/monsters. They are all well known celestial generals who protected their kingdom. They were at first relectant to go but in the end agreed. Yet an error occured while the process of sending them down to earth was happening. The 16 of them lose their memories as celestials and go to earth as normal human beings. A messenger is sent down to earth to help collect their memories and aid them in protecting earth. Once they recollect their memories love and hate will clash as well as mixed feelings. They start relying on each other more and more to survive. And someone appears to be betraying them, who may it be? Who will survive the final battle when it comes?

Foreword

I tried writing this story a couple of years ago and a gave up like after 2 chapters because i didn't have my story planned out and i didn't know wat i was goin to write about. I wrote it on winglin, it was called 'The 20 famous celestials (we were once together)'. The plot was a little different. I'm goin to try and write this story again and i hope i can succeed. I hope you guys like it. :)

Comments

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I_AM_A_SHINee_BABE #1
FINALLY!!!! Thanx for the update..... Still waiting for a INT between the guy n the girls XD
jamyung #2
five hundred years
hahahahahahahahaha
so funny they are so old
girls are more trustworthy then boys
update soon
thanks for the update
jamyung #3
please update soon
I_AM_A_SHINee_BABE #4
I bow down to the god of detailing! <br />
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Awesome chapter Emerald! keep it up =)
jamyung #5
so eight girls are going down to earth<br />
sounds eteresting<br />
wonder what are they going to talk about<br />
update soon
I_AM_A_SHINee_BABE #6
please update soon!
Emerald #7
don't worry of course i won't give up on 'IITFJATM'<br />
and thank you for commenting and liking this story too
I_AM_A_SHINee_BABE #8
O M EFFIN' GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!<br />
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I love the foreword!<br />
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You better not give up on IITFJATM ^^