. and it is not your only fic killing him if am not wrong(?)
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dongwoo is jumpy. all kid-like and very bright. he is gorgeous, but seems like cant get grasp on it in the same way as L does. I love him being kid...
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'turtlesoo...' hahahaa. it reminds me of yamo era, when dongwoo ran to the sea right after reaching the beach, and l kept walking saying that it is okay that a person keep walking while the other running like a kid *they are all kid practically inside*
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okay, back to the fic. dongwoo is killed gracefully(?) l is suffering befittingly(?).
wondering if cutting the fic into two chap will change anything. like, having first chap bubbly and the second chap contains the tragedy. anyway, great fic. thank you. but am really sad that dongwoo died *oh blanc, you shut up =.=*
Chapter 1: I really liked this story!
I sometimes feel like the DongSoo tag moves really slowly, (not that i check it often too though) so when i found this beautifully angsty fic, i felt like nearly crying. Myungsoo and Dongwoo's relation was really cute, how they both took care of each other and they needed each other.
The ending was really beautiful and painful, the last paragraph especially, the last sentence was the perfect way to end off this fic.
thank you for sharing this beautiful fic, i'm looking forward to read your other fic too. :)
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