Born To Be With You (Editing)

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Having just lost her Mother, Ahri's (you) life takes a drastic turn. When the popular and handsome boys at school begin taking a rather intense interest in you, strange things start happening, maybe they have to do with your odd 'birthmarks'. Whatever happens, it's certain to be one hell of a ride.

Foreword

Currently editing all of the terrible grammar. No part of the plot or story will change in anyway. Only some reconstructed sentences.

 

P.S. Thoughts will be in italics. Also I'm from Australia so some of my words are spelt different, like mum/mom, so don't think that I can't spell lol

 

Poster was created by junna9921, who did an amazing job and I will be eternally grateful for!!!

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asunainkpopland #1
Chapter 40: I completely respect your opinion, I have also fallen out of love with some groups that pretty much used to be my obsession. I also agree with all your points about BTS, they're brilliant music producers who really put their effort into everything.
If you haven't already I would suggest listening to EXO's latest album (The War) I loved every song on it and I felt they all flowed together really well (I wasn't a huge fan of the Repackaged Version but you can still give it a go). Plus the choreography for 'The Eve' is to die for seriously. As for a funny and relatable, their episode on 'Men on a Mission' was hilarious (I still miss the good old Exo Showtime days though). When you do update this story, I'll be here to read it and cheer you on, no pressure though - take your time :)
ChoiHyemin #2
Chapter 40: I Really like your story from the plotbto thr character. Also i like the romantic scene that blossom not very fast but slow and determined. I really like kind if this story.

I am glad that 2 of them have been successfuly unlock their power. I really curious with the rest. Especially with how you make the bonding time aka kiss scene in the future. If Suho the calm and collected can put such a clingy act how about Sehun that clingy fron the beginning

I hope you can make this story complete. Whetever time will take. I am respected your busy time also your career coz i, myself got busy with college task. Fighting for you ^^
Baekmylight12 #3
hope you'll return someday this fic has been with me since i started stanning exo:"(
MyIceGirl #4
Chapter 40: Uhnuu ㅠㅠ take your time updating. I'd still read your work even if I have to wait for years :)
MyIceGirl #5
Chapter 7: I love everything about it! ㅠㅠ
MyIceGirl #6
Chapter 2: She's older than Kyungsoo and Sehun? ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ
Lolypop123 #7
Chapter 40: Aw too bad,update if u can ^3^
mirjaelli #8
Chapter 40: Take your time to update
SwindlerLNoko #9
Chapter 28: "D.O and Lay were a bit harder to predict, they were passive but both were incredibly intelligent"
"Kris , Sehun was alright for someone so skinny"
LOL so Kai gave Kris bloody nose? LOL
"oblivious to the invisible barrier that you had unknowingly created between your bonded Forces, but now it was gone" - i had goosebumps
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