Going ahead and coming back

Description

When Donghae tells him he's going to New York in two days, Hyukjae gets royally pissed. There's a concert to plan, their new song to practice and work to get done. And there's that awkwardness between them that he had planned to erase with some more pampering during Christmas holidays.

 

[I should be able to update at the end of this week more or less. I have exams and tests to do in these days...so...yeah. Anyway, bear in mind that English is not my first language. I'll proof-read everything twice or three times, but maybe you'll find some mistake]

Foreword

"I was thinking... what if we go and eat out on the weekend?", Hyukjae asks during the first break of the day.

Super Junior members were scattered on the floor of the SM practice room, whining and complaining because Miracle was really too much for people of their age.

Donghae sighs and hasn't even the courage to meet Hyukjae's expectant eyes. So he just averts his gaze and shook his head. "I'mgoingtonewyork", he mumbles, pretending to be particularly interested into Shindong and Sungmin's fight over the last sandwich Ryeowook had prepared..

"What?"

"I'm...I'm going to New York", he repeats and the hurt he sees in Hyukjae's eyes makes him want to kick himself in the .

Probably he should have told him earlier.

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supermonkeyy
#1
Chapter 1: Donghae is an idiot!! But EunHae are so sweet when they are together. This is love *__*
cj041586
#2
Chapter 1: This was so great I loved it! I really can't blame Hyuk for being so mad at Hae for the way he was acting and Hyuk just didn't know what the problem was but it was so sweet at the end when they made up and I love the last line when he asked Hae about his non-gift hahahahahaha!
dazzlin92 #3
Chapter 1: Sooo awesome! !! I wish I can write like u do...huhu

Really love this story and all of your other stories....it really felt like they were real n couldnt help but to love it!! Gonna be ur follower onwards..

Thank you!!!
GuruGuru_
#4
Chapter 1: *drowns in feels* Whoa... Your writing is so neat and pretty.. I can't find another word to describe it. Is a wonderful first EunHae, beautiful work ♥ Thank you for sharing :) I'll sure become a follower of your work, haha.
EunhyuradeLuffy #5
Chapter 1: This beautiful yet awesome, EUNHAE is LOVE <33333

Thanks for sharing (>̯͡⌣<̯͡)
Noirocker
#6
Chapter 1: first time??? wow...awesome. i loveeee it ♥
heartykyu
#7
Chapter 1: OMGHJKAHFKAJFAKFHA. I SO LOVE THIS. THANK YOU <333 this is AMAZINGGGGG. <3
InstantDayDream #8
First thing first:
Don't you ever dare to post such an amazing work without telling me straightaway. I might be your Unnie (seriously nobody believes that anyway lol) but remember that I have a certain affinity with evil creature, namely Kim, Cho and Shim.
Getting back to the story: Oh I love it!! You know I'm not into EunHae but I'm into angst so YAY FOR ANGST! I liked this kind of angsty-fluffy-sad feeling that is all over your story, even in the end when the two of actually sorted everything out. And I also liked how you brought out Donghae's child like personality even in the bad things, such as beeing stubborn and not knowing very well how to deal with everything so he'd rather stay silent and shut everything out. Also I enjoyed how you pointed out that it must be a hell of a time for Hyukjae, doing Leeteuk's work and having to deal with everything considering that he is among the youngest rather than among the oldest.
Oh and KIM HEECHUL YOU WONDERFUL CREATURE. It's so difficult to find a in character Heechul lately thatI need to clap you for this!
sommersby16 #9
Chapter 1: Nice!!!its sweet! :')
rosy0691 #10
Chapter 1: Cicci 92...I know you are worried about what I think about this FF, but I have to say VERY WELL DONE!!!!!! I am just nicely surprised!! You have done a great job here!!!! Thumbs up!!!! This is a very well written story!! I hope that you keep on improving your writing skills...Meanwhile I will look forward to read your next stories!! I love you Cicci..and you know that :* :*

Sorry for any mistake..xD