Why are you doing this to us?

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This is my first fanfic :)

It's a exo love story.

Hope you like it :)

 

Foreword

You walk down the beach a beautiful Saturday.. You sit there for some hours just too relax, but fall asleep. You woke up by someone bumbing your legs...

What do you think happens?

What did she do wrong in her past?

Read more to find out

 

 

 

I'm sorry if there's some grammar mistakes. Let me know.

Tell me if you like the story or not. AND tell me honestly if it's something you don't like about it, so I can correct it :) or give me some tips :) ;)

This is just a story, so don't get mad at meeeeee :)

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nadiara #1
Chapter 24: waaah you changed the title? wow it must be going to be awesome! Fighting! I also busy with college ehehe I'm not good on managing my time so... besides college I only sleep but I can't lessen my sleeping hour lol Good luck author-nim!
nadiara #2
Chapter 23: Uwwaaah... Fighting with your school author-nim!! Actually I want to help you but I just starting my first fanfic so I'm afraid I can't handle both my fics and yours :( it's okay I'll wait for you :) school is more important!!
nadiara #3
Chapter 22: uwwaaah... what did she do to her uncle?? why does her uncle has the urge to kill her like whut it's so scary having an uncle like that O.O
thatpabo #4
Chapter 16: Honestly, when i first read this chapter i was giggling alone at my room, lol. That feels, the goosbumb. But the more chapter come, it feels different. Not so much goosebumb, maybe the story is too... Quick? You guys can say that.
Madelen #5
I'm glad you liked chapter 20 <3 I will work hard on the next one :) And it's comming up soon :)
kyungsoo-akira #6
Chapter 20: OMO! Yay! Cant wait for the next chapter. .
nadiara #7
Chapter 20: Uwahahaa it's getting more interesting!! Who's Joon? Lee joon? And your english is now much better ahaaayy so many improvement! Love love <3
nadiara #8
Chapter 19: Muwahaha oh my god yes please make a chapter when Kai confessed to nadia!! hahaha

Umm.. And why, when she remember the one she loves, Kyungsoo, but baekhyun remember choi ____'s name and not Dlal??
nadiara #9
Chapter 18: oh my god are you really planning on making the main character dead? noooo please nooo. she just finally happy to be together with D.O but now they have to be separated?? noooo
nadiara #10
Chapter 17: I love you author-nim. I squealed in front of my laptop and jumped on my bed until my dad told me to be quiet reading this fic lmao I love Kai so much yeah he's the luckiest man alive to have me muwahahaha

oh and I hope she and baekhyun will be okay :(
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