Hi. I just checked on this story. I think the storyline is somewhat common, but it's okay though. Just keep in mind that the major spelling mistakes are way too much and please do give "__" for dialogs.It confuses the reader if you didn't give it in. I'm sorry for being harsh and please check through the chapter before publishing it. Grammatical errors in the chapters really irks me. Thanks and I hope you improve more.. you should try getting a beta reader or co-author that really got the quality to correct you. What is the use of co-author if he/she didn't even bother to help you OR his/her English is also bad?
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