Chapter 1: It's a cute story, but why do you have the need to add random korean into your fic? it's very annoying and instantly turns me off a story. A lot of people don't actually understand what they're saying so it'd be helpful if you would just write in english because your ideas are very nice. Or if you wanted to write in korean, write the whole story in the one language!! this is just a tip if you want more readers i'm not forcing you okkk~ :>
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