That Something

Description

He had that something, and she fell for it.

But maybe that something wasn't enough to make her happy after all...

Foreword

To make sure things are clear : Kai's something ISN'T some kind of creepy allusion to his... you know.

It's my first time publishing here and also my first time directly writing a story in English, which is not my mothertongue, I mean without translating from French to English. I'd be glad if you notify me the (probably numerous) mistakes I made. I took an exam today and as I am really² sleepy, mistakes must have flowded this story, sorry !

I wrote this story listening to TVXQ's Something, and no it's not as bright as the song hahah.

By the way, I've never written any oneshot before, so I tried a whole new "writing style" xD

What else to say.. Ah ! This fiction hum.... almost became M rated. You'll see, I cut it ! Maybe someday, if I have inspiration, I'll rewrite this part huhuhuh~

And if someone thinks this story deserve a beautiful poster, feel free to make one, I at photoshop HAHAHA!

 

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Teenfinite896 #1
Chapter 4: i can't wait for you to post a alternative ending with them getting back together again!! ^^ you done a great job in writting the epilogue! (: im looking forward to your alternative happy ending oh~! Hwaiting! & im sure you will get in when the result come out. have fate in youself. even if you didnt get in, there is still next time for you to try again. relax yourself ya~~ Hwaiting Hwaiting!! ^^i
seulsung #2
Chapter 4: Why am I thinking that the husband is Siwon from Super Junior haha. XD I loved reading this ♡ Especially when class gets boring. Hope to read more from you! ☆
Kailipseu #3
Chapter 3: odg i can't wait for the epilogue ;-;
janikkaxx #4
Chapter 2: Indeed a sequel. ;;;
Dang Jongin and Yuri's sister. < \ 3
strawberrister
#5
Chapter 2: this is heartbreaking,
and jongin is a jeeeeeerk
please make a sequel and make yuri happy ;;;A;;;
Teenfinite896 #6
Chapter 2: Author nimble could you do a sequel with happy ending with them back together again after a few years?
Kailipseu #7
ouch i can't stop thinking about this fic in school ugh you should make a sequel tbh ;-;
leeteuksuperjunior #8
Chapter 2: So depressing but great story....
MszCassie123456 #9
Chapter 2: Ouch. That hurts. Haha great story though