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Welcome to Octy's Review & Beta Shop!

Status: 
Open / Closed Permanently / Busy / Hiatus / Revamp / Hiring / Finishing Requests

About Us:
We try our best to provide quality reviews and beta-reading services!

Updates:
04/01/14: Opening of shop
23/01/14: New Reviewer & Beta-Reader-Awkwardtofu211
09/02/14: New Reviewer-MakeMyLifeColourful
02/03/14: Re-vamped!
14/03/14: Re-Opened!
23/03/14: New Beta-Reader-Sootemup

 

 



Staff Information:

Octy08: 
Owner, Reviewer & Beta-Reader
Review Profile & Sample

Awkwardtofu211:
Reviewer & Beta-Reader
Review Profile & Sample

MakeMyLifeColourful:
Reviewer
Review Profile & Sample

Sootemup:
Beta-Reader

 

 

 



Rules:

- Subscription is a must or your request will not be accepted. Upvotes are highly appreciated! :3
- Requesting should be done in the comments section
- Please do not rush us in completing your beta/review request! We all have other things to attend to    and we're still schooling so yeah, you get the point
- You may request as many times as you'd like
- Do comment once you have received your review
- Do not bash your reviewer/beta-reader! We have feelings too :S
- We have the right to refuse any stories but don't worry; that's unlikely of us ;)
- Yes, we accept any genres or pairings but no Yuri
- Credit us in your foreword!
- Yes, re-dos are allowed :) Simply request for one nicely
- Yes, you are allowed to request for both a review and beta-reading at the same time :)
- Cancelling your request? Comment below. Editting or deleting your story? Comment below.
- Password: YayOcty
 

 

 



Rubrics for Review:

- First Impressions
- Title
- Description & Foreword
-  Originality, Plot & Flow
- Language (Grammar)
- Vocabulary
- Characterisation
- Overall

In case you haven't noticed, there isn't any grading system. Honestly, I don't believe
in that kind of thing because I'm only here to give you constructive reviews, not ratings :)


 

 

 



Form for Review:
(Your reviewer will be assigned to you based on your genre)

- Author:
- Story Title:
-Story Link:
- Story Type (Oneshot/Chaptered):
- Genre:
- Characters/Pairings:
- Summary:
- Status (On--going/Completed):
- Is English your first language:
- Additional Notes:
-Password (In the rules section):
 

 

 



Form for Beta-Reading:
(Your beta-reader will be assigned to you based on your genre)

- Author:
- Story Title:
- Story Link:
- Story Type (Oneshot/Chaptered):
- If chaptered, state how many pages you'd like to have beta-read:
- Genre:
- Status (Ongoing/Completed):
- Is English your first language:
- Additional Notes:
 

 

 

Foreword

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NorthMelon #1
Chapter 16: HAI! Wanna be affies?
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/708701/tomboy-review-shop-open-hiring-you-tomboy-hiring-reviewshop
grainsofbap #2
Chapter 16: I hope you feel better!! <3
xiumin-nimuix #3
Hey there, sorry for the inconvenience but I will be canceling my request!
willienelson09 #4
Chapter 16: Hey, thanks for taking the time out of your busy schedule to post this. I hope the next few months go smoothly and that you'll be doing good.
jonginies #5
hey there! i'm cancelling my request bc i'm deleting my fanfic. i'm so sorry for the inconvenience. :/
Tierbanre #6
Hi! First of all, thank you for the review. I know since I started to write my fanfic that it wasn't going to be really good. It's the first time I write a text in english, so it's really difficult to me express what I want to say xD I'm just learning to speak it and I found this a good way to start.
Tai is too vulgar, I know xDDD
I appreciate a lot your review, you helped me so much.
Anyway, I'm going to finish my fanfic, and next time I will write one in spanish (my spanish grammar is perfect, yay! xD) and then I will try to translate it.
Thank you, again!! ^.^
LoveAsAlways #7
Chapter 1: Well I hope mine can be reviewed soon x)
jonginies #8
oh, can i make some changes to my request? i'm changing it from one shot to chaptered. ^^
Mattokki #9
Author: Mattokki
- Story Title: It's Not Me
-Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/685695/it-s-not-me-angst-oneshot-baekhyun-chanyeol-taehyung-vbts
- Story Type (Oneshot/Chaptered): oneshot (with an epilogue at the end, does that make it a twoshot? Not sure)
- Genre: angst (with a bit a dead body in the beginning, just getting that out there)
- Characters/Pairings: V (of BTS), Byun Beakhyun (minor), Park Chanyeol (minor); no pairings
- Summary : It wasn't me.I didn't do it. Everybody seems to think that I'm a killer. But I didn't do it. Why will nobody believe me? No matter how much I scream, no matter how much I cry, no one seems to hear my voice. It wasn't me. Nobody believes me. Do you?
- Status (On--going/Completed): Completed
- Is English your first language: Yes, it is.
- Additional Notes: There's a bit of descriptive, almost gore-ish, at the beginning, and a tiny bit in the middle. Nothing too bad, but make sure whoever is reviewing it can handle that.
-Password (In the rules section): YayOcty
jonginies #10
- Author: kpopaholic121

- Story Title: Finding the Eternity in Our Love

- Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/671840/finding-the-eternity-in-our-love-angst-mark-got7

- Story Type (Oneshot/Chaptered): Oneshot

- Genre: angst

- Characters/Pairings: Mark Tuan & Kim Nayeon (OC)

- Summary: Days... Weeks... Months... Yet, he was still at that certain place where they first met as if he was stopped in time. Time seemed to have frozen for him who can't forget and leave the past, when she left him behind all alone. After she left, he finally started to regret the things he hasn't told her, the things he wasn't able to do with her. Most of all, he regretted he wasn't able to give her good memories. Searching for her, still, he wasn't able to find her. Trying to get her back, still, it was nothing but a mere futile attempt. No matter how hard he tried, his efforts shamelessly turned into vain. Why? It's simply because she isn't here anymore...

- Status (On--going/Completed): On-going

- Is English your first language: nope, it's my second. :)

- Additional Notes: -

- Password (In the rules section): YayOcty
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