Part I

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MissOrange #1 Mar 30, 2014 11:58:10

Chapter 6: THIS IS A GOOD FANFIC.
Sequel please ^-^ you are a good author! the grammars are good.
Long sequel please, kekeke :)
ah, what happened to Luhan? I'm curious

ChOrCeE #2 Mar 11, 2014 23:28:55

Chapter 6: oooohhh!!!! I really like this fic!!!
AWESOME! 짱짱짱!!! XD

byacell #3 Dec 30, 2013 21:13:37

Chapter 3: Poor Tao ;n;

byacell #4 Dec 30, 2013 20:23:18

Chapter 2: Fast move, Kyungsoo. This plot is too fast but it still great ^^
Fighting! ^^

randomdweeb13 #5 Dec 30, 2013 20:07:21

Chapter 2: Thanks for this :) You were a great help ^^

Slytherinese #6 Dec 30, 2013 06:50:19

Chapter 2: A little fast paced but the story line is good!^^ and i love how you create your sentences :D

myungsoodaehyun36 #7 Dec 30, 2013 05:06:18

Chapter 2: Oppsie my mistake i thought it was already complete :) mian but update fast authornim i want to know what happens next

myungsoodaehyun36 #8 Dec 30, 2013 05:03:00

Chapter 2: Ohhhh... I want a sequel... What about tao? Sequel pls...