Chapter 1: wow so interesting!!!!!!!!!!! just the whole concept of time deviants is so cool!!!!!! Would love to read more about that concept but the story is perfect this way!!!! So cute and man i almost cried bruh cuz i thought zi sacrificed his !!!!! but thank god im feeling so relieved!!!! thank you for this great read and happy holidays C:

Chapter 1: Perfect *-* i cant say anything else right now... Just Amazing.. The wohle idea wow and so cute... Is there a sequel? There could be one... I will read more by youright now

Chapter 1: omg I was almost gonna cry coz I thought Tao had sacrificed himself..and then…THE ENDING IS PERF. ALSO this whole time deviant thing is soooo interesting and a great twist on the MID mv!!!

Chapter 1: this was awesome, omg
this seriously was edasnbvguinjk
yo, seriously, have you thought of doin a second prt?
like what capricake said, like i kinda wanna know too
but either way, i luved this
thx authornim for this fic ^^

Have you considered a short second part? You know, like to explain how things got fixed? I'd really like that.

Being a fan of science fiction, I found this story quite entertaining. I admire your imagination. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

Chapter 1: waaaahahahahahahahahhaha~! so good

Chapter 1: I just want to say, I am glad that I took a break to read this story. My feels are now warm and fuzzyy to which they should last from now until the year is over. I love it's originality as well as how everything and everyone ties in together. You did a magnificent job on this story and I'll be saving this for a later read.

Thank you and happy holidays/Merry Christmas!!!

Chapter 1: AMAZING!!! I LOVE THIS!!!