Glow. Electricity. Life.

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Entry for the contest/workshop 'Writing Down the Bones" by Shiny_A_plus: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/602008/writing-down-the-bones-writers-contest-open-shinee-workshop-writing-you-competition-writingcontest-shop

Prompt chosen: Time, Eternity, Renewal

Characters: Minho, Key, Taemin

Foreword

"Just a disconnected wire.

Just a stupid, innocent disconnected wire in the brain.

If only someone could turn on the lights…"

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onige_a #1
Chapter 1: Wow.
This was interesting. I love fantasy stories. Like everything that makes you think, because it's not reality. Because you have to think to understand what's going on.
You imagine what it looks like. The lake, the woods, the lights, the cable, ... even Key. Because he sounds magical. He sounds... perfect. Not that he isn't in real life, I'm just saying, you describe him even more perfectly.
It makes me believe in a great afterlife. That we have someone waiting for us there. No matter what happens next.
Thank you for writing this. ^-^
~ ♥
SHINeeFever_95 #2
Chapter 1: This story is amazing... thanks for writing such work of art <3
Shiny_A_plus #3
Chapter 1: Just wanted to comment and say that I have officially consumed this short story and am still ruminating on its deep meanings...
Thank you for writing it. I will be in touch with the review in the near future.
Girl-From-Hell #4
Chapter 1: Oh hey, I don't know why, but your story reminded me a lot of an Italian Minkey I read some time ago. And you're saying you're italian. Are you by any chance the same author who written it? :D

Anyway, it's awesome :D
neverendingfairy #5
Chapter 1: Tbh this story is a bit confusing at first (I wondered whether it'll end as MinKey or 2min) but after I read to the end, I think it's really good! And when you said you cannot write in English, I can only say...you're definitely a liar because you wrote beautifully.

Looking forward to see more from you!
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