children of yesterday

Description

he was crying outside the tube, watching her drowning

Foreword

My entry for : RESTRICTED -- angst writing contest

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suforlife #1 Nov 6, 2015 05:26:10

Chapter 1: This is soooooo perfect. I cried my eyes out.

suzyand_ #2 Dec 3, 2014 23:46:52

Chapter 1: So beautiful~
Update another soon!

spectrumwings #3 Dec 30, 2013 23:48:32

Chapter 1: This is like so angst and all but very beautiful :)

Betrayal #4 Dec 23, 2013 08:14:32

Such a beautiful poem of the dark kingdom!

veinless #5 Dec 20, 2013 16:33:42

Chapter 1: congratulations on winning (laughs) well played and props on you.

chiiruu #6 Dec 20, 2013 11:41:42

Chapter 1: Beautiful yet dark story. It somehow reminded me if Grimm's Fairy tales.

axonie23 #7 Dec 19, 2013 19:11:14

Chapter 1: A big applause for u!
Ur writing style n the story plot
Is sooo captivating!!
I really really love it!>. <
Thank u for writing this story
This intrigued me to read something more for ur future story hehe :) ♥♥♥

ks9094 #8 Dec 19, 2013 15:05:23

Chapter 1: Such a captivating and innovative fanfic.

bhadra001 #9 Dec 19, 2013 08:10:22

This is different. Not what I expected and completely pleased with that fact. The story is eerily beautiful.The characters seem to like from an age old fable.suzy being punished along with her family is both noble and heartwrenching. I love this. Looking forward to more such spectacular fics from your end.

gudaeshipper #10 Dec 19, 2013 06:17:15

Chapter 1: This is so damn beautiful. I can't believe anyone can write something like that it's just so emotional and over whelming I just loved it I don't know how to explain what I'm feeling right now. I was about to give it up when I got confused around the middle but thank god I didn't it's one of the best I've ever read thank you so so much for taking time of your life to write this