The tale of the candy bar. [oneshot]

Description

problem arises because of a candy bar (?)

Foreword

my first story. And i would like apologize beforehand,because i know the story is not good. i'll try and improve in future..

thank you..smiley

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PURPLEDREAM_girl #1
Chapter 1: Oh!! They are so cute....
MissQhuay
#2
Chapter 1: hehe, so fluffy.. Hae reacted a "bit" selfish.. sooooo cute!
pinkaddict #3
Chapter 1: omg!! the end already! :)))


i like the story!! im a eubhae shipper btw! :DD

lol at beijing fried rice! :DD
whuppet #4
Lmao, Bejing Fried Rice!! XD
beo1211
#5
Hey ya ♥ I've finished my work. Hehe :x
'n here is the lnk, like u asked :x
http://beovips.wordpress.com/2012/05/01/oneshot-pg-the-tale-of-the-candy-bar-eunhae/
♥ ♥ ♥
Can u write more HaeHyuk for me, HaeHyuk, not EunHae?! Haha. Just kiddin', love ur fic, 'n i love you too =p~
jadekaulitz
#6
This Is too damn cute!!! For their own damn good lok
Hannie and Heenim!!!!!!
In so glad you had them there!!!
I'm a HanChul shipper :P
Love eunhae though lol
"Beijingfriedrice" lololol <3
beo1211
#7
Ya ya ya. I love this fic. So sweet <3 <3 =p~
I really lob the scence of this story. Hehe. I'm a big HaeHyuk shipper, so i can't really talk when it comes to HyukHae. Sorry sorry sorry sorry. But i really lob this fic. Every thing is just so sweet. Yaaaaaaaaaa : x
Kim Heechul. Kim Heechul. Kim Heechul. Kim Heechul. Oh my Kim Heechul. "Hankyung-ssi, if we fought will you by me desserts too?" Heechul asked hopefully, battling his eyelashes. Heenim is best of the best, so damn cute n evil =))))
n Hankyung, "Beijing fried rice" every time. He's very good at handling Heenim. LOL. :))
<3 <3 <3
Like i said before, i really love this, n i want to translate this into Vietnamese n put this in my private blog. Can i do it?! Please. Please. Of course w' full credit w' ur name on it. Pleaseeeee :x
Wolfram_iflameu #8
Hi, halmeoni! XD It's my turn to comment on your fics nao!
So, first off, this idea is intriguing. So, awesomely innovative, that I don't even know what to do other than stare in awe at your ingenuity. You made something as commonplace as a candy bar a base for an utterly cute, and adorable oneshot and that just made me go *__*
Hats off to you, Halmeoni for the amazing idea! The connection, the fact that the entire story started because of a candy bar is amazing. <3 Also, I love the title. It's so short, sweet and enticing that it seems so intriguing. I was totally wondering how you would manage to model an entire oneshot on a candy bar, and waah, unnie! You did it amazingly! <3
Now, the story was just <333333 It was all so cute and normal and funny and awesome and! Arrgh! Let me just put it in one word, 'Brilliant!'
And the apology scene was so CUTE! The two of them were so amazing together! I loved the slight awkwardness and then the whole relaxed atmosphere in the end again. <3 They're apologies to each other were so sheepish and adorkable! <3 I mean, they totally knew they were being so silly for small matters! :D
Waah, halmeoni, really, I think it's amazing how you can showcase an instance of seemingly little importance and then make it a lovely oneshot! LOVE IT UNNIE! <3
ELF_Jewel
#9
Awwwww.....I LOVED IT AGAIN!!! It's SOOO like them to act thay way. I LOVED the last line by Hanni. So cute!