Chapter 1: Oh my god,
i cant say anything
am speechless really,
it was sweet n sad story become one and that was good
Nice ff,
Good job!! waiting ur next ff
Chapter 1: This story of yours is quite admirable. In spite of your slight confusion with singular and plural nouns at times like in (Those beautiful word) would have been (Those beautiful words) instead. There are other things, but they are minor and so this strength of this piece outshines those details. The ending is done perfectly in style.
Good job, and may your future works be even better than ever, c:
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