I am trying to find an old story on here but I cannot remember the title so I am going through all the story links I found this sounds interesting and has a nice description Will read soon

Visiting old fics!

Chapter 1: This … is a real example of writing.

I love everything about this one-shot, and I mean everything. The eye-catching opener, that heated moment of love exchanged between both characters, the sentimental ending written beautifully in evasion of its triteness … Everything is so wonderfully crafted and written for the readers to clearly see how each character is feeling without overdoing anything. Your flow is beautiful, and despite the switching of first-person POVs (a POV looked down upon in AFF), you manage to handle the conscience alterations as if you did so on an everyday basis.

Everything point in writing goes unignored in this well-prepped fic of beauty, yet the fluid scene changes are what endear me the most. All of them are enchanting and profoundly emotionally compelling, but the TRANSITIONS are what make me lose my sanity; a piece of artwork. Everything ties together to become more beautiful later on, and that's what distresses me most about the short length of the one-shot … My greed just refuses to come to an end.

Thank you so much for writing this; I couldn't have my breath taken away any quicker.

aw so sad:( but good

so so sad!!!!

When I read about the road, I knew that there was going to be an accident. And I thought, 'this is going to be so cliche'.

But your writing was so flawless and the heartbreaking ending made it as though it was a whole new piece of original storyline although it is a fact that it had been used over and over again by many.

And did I mention how much I love those first few lines of your prologue? And I adored it even more after I read it at the ending of the oneshot. (:

*Sniffles* Omo. Thats so sad. I love this story

*sighs* omg loved ur story soooo much!!!
ah! made me cry T.T