beta: where you have someone read through it to check for mistakes and help fix them (:
I really like it, poor Sehunnie T.T but i'm glad that Luhan was able to fix him (:
Chapter 1: Short and simple. I liked it.
I really felt bad for Sehun at first. It was nice for him to finally meet Luhan in the end. I liked how you described Luhan 'fixing up' Sehun.
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